Date: October 12, 2008 09:25 am Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
I liked the idea, but some of it was pretty out of character. I can see Pam saying how much she missed him and parts of him, but maybe not there and especially not like that. It was a good first fic though :)
Date: August 17, 2007 09:44 am Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
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Author's Response: Ha ha, caught u off guard didn't it? If you'd like me to change the ending I will.
Date: August 17, 2007 01:46 am Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
i thought it was really cute and then i just giggled at the end cus i wasn't expecting that.
Date: August 16, 2007 11:49 pm Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
I added a disclaimer per MTT rules...
8 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2007 09:07 pm Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
WOW !!! Thet was hot Jammer.
7 [Report This]Date: August 16, 2007 07:04 pm Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
So i enjoyed up until the elevator. if you're going to have jim do THAT to her you have to elaborate a little. get into a little more detail and it'll be even better. good job otherwise:)
Date: August 16, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Your legs, your chest, your...
It is a really sweet story. I can't totally see Pam saying this in the office (specially not that day)... but still sweet. And I would miss all of that too, cause um, its JIM!