Reviews For The Day After
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Reviewer: Newtruefan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2010 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really good. It begs for a sequel.

Reviewer: sunny Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2006 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

What do you mean, "The End"? I want more!

Which means, "Fabulous job."

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I totally loved the email from Katy - and the reactions of the other women. But my favorite part was the end, so full of promise!!!  Great story!

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 04:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay for a happy ending. I loved the email/voicemail messages and the ladies' reactions...hysterical!

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw, nice. :)

Reviewer: Pixel Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. 

Reviewer: hireath Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sex symbol Jim.  Very realistic.

I like the messages.  Mom so concerned (Jimmy, ahhh), Dwight worried about the proximity to his desk and Kelly rambling.   Great ending too!

 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I like this. Poor Jim would be the most popular thing ever, wouldn't he? Heh.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor Jim!  That is like the day from hell.  Fortunately, he got a nice surprise.  I really enjoyed this story.

One small thing... Kevin's last name is Malone.



Author's Response: Thanks!  I looked everywhere but couldn't find it, but I knew it was out there!  I'll fix it now!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good Ending.

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