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Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Perennial Passion

Thanks for wrapping this up so nicely.

Author's Response: you're very welcome! Thanks for reading and commenting. Happy Premiere Night!!

Reviewer: sharky Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2007 03:39 pm Title: Planting the seed

Yeah! I love what you've done with this. Can't wait for everyone to see the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked how I added to this chapter. It definitely needed "more"!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 25, 2007 09:49 am Title: Chapter 6 - Prick and Bleed

and so the angst begins  -please keep short

Author's Response: ha ha! Don't worry, a nice fluffy ending is coming soon for those crazy kids!

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Taking Root

yay! I love it, keep going!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I actually have the story done, I just need to finish editing it. I swear, at least one more chapter is on the way!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2007 07:34 pm Title: Taking Root

Ha! This is a fun blast from the past, I love how all of the characters just happen to be in the same place. I LOVE the ring toss prank, it felt so in character for all three, and I really love that Pam's best friend is named Michelle, since that is my name, and I started high school in 1996 (I was not, however, any sort of slut).

Author's Response:

I'm glad I could bring a little 1996 back for you! Michelle was the name of my childhood best friend. She moved when we were in hs. But she was crazy like the Michelle in the story and I used her as my inspiration.

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Let Love Grow

I love how outgoing Pam is as Lauren. But will all of this catch up with her?  Oooh, can't wait to find out! 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I guess you'll just have to wait and see! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Budding emotions

Loved Kevin selling snow cones and the Jim and Pam/Lauren chemistry.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2007 08:08 pm Title: Planting the seed

Cute idea!  A friend and I once did something similar when we were that age. Unfortunately we didn't manage to hook up with someone as cute as Jim though!

Author's Response: Not all of us can be as lucky as Pam!

Reviewer: sweetchariots Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 09:19 am Title: Planting the seed

I'm so glad you like the story!

Reviewer: big haircut Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2007 09:16 am Title: Budding emotions

I'm really liking this....I can't wait to see what happens! For a second I thought that the snow cone guy was foing to be Roy!!

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2007 03:32 pm Title: Planting the seed

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be posting chapter 2 soon.

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