Reviews For Ordinary Life
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Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Indian Summer

::sigh:: I love everything about that one. There's something breathtakingly romantic about the thought of them being cuddly together....especially in this sort of unconscious way. LOVE THIS.

Author's Response: See, for me, the most romantic stuff with these two is the smallest - honestly, I don't need to see them on  fancy dates with flowers and violins - all they have to do is hold hands (they don't even have to be awake, for chrissakes) and I'm there. Glad you agree, LoveFool.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 09:48 pm Title: Gary Cooper

Yay! Hurray for futuristic fanfic! My favorite kind -- where Jim and Pam being together is basically the law according to the rules. Let's just hope Daniels and Co. are aware of these laws.

Author's Response: Seriously - about time GD & Co. got with the program! After all, is it so wrong that I just want their legs to touch, LOL? Thanks, LoveFool...fingers crossed!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

I enjoyed all of these, but I think Indian Summer was my favorite. I love how they even find each other while sleeping, it reminds me of those little kissing stuffed animals that have magnets in their paws or lips to draw them together. Except the story was much better of course!

Author's Response: Magnetic stuffed animals - I like it! And yeah, there's something about that unconscious contact that gets to me too. Thanks so much, Kaystar!

Reviewer: false_palindrome Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

He never claimed to be Saint Jim of Irish Spring.

 

 

love. 

 

Author's Response: Have to admit, I kind of liked that name too...glad it worked for you. Much thanks, false palindrome!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

Aww, I remember those giddy 'I even want to shower with you' days.  Good times.  Sleepy Pam is adorable.

Author's Response: You know, forget all the big romantic gestures. I just like the idea of her leaning on him while she wakes up (the naked in the shower part is just gravy ;-) Thanks, Lisa!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Indian Summer

Not short.  Concentrated.

Because she can.

Oh, this is making me even more giddy for S4.  HAND HOLDING, I TELL YOU!!! 



Author's Response: Concentrated...I like that ;-) Seriously, is there anything simpler and more intimate than hand holding? And damn right she can! Thanks, lisahoo...always tickled when you like a story.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

So nice...

Author's Response: Thank you, Shassafrass...so kind.

Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 06:26 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

I love your normal day to day stuff - it's just so warm and right.



Author's Response: Wow...'warm and right' is a wonderful compliment. I think these two are such 'normal' everyday characters; that's just where they live for me, I guess. Thanks so much, Geinnob!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 06:17 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

What a cute little slice of life.  Well written, of course.  I liked how Jim didn't feel like he could escape from Karen.  I've often thought I could totally see JAM doing really mundane things like grocery shopping, watching tv, cleaning house or whatever and it would still be cute.  I'm excited to see where you will take this.

Author's Response: Well, if you want mundane story lines, I'm your girl, LOL! Glad you enjoyed...and yeah, I think his discomfort was as much with himself at that point, as with Karen. He just wasn't that guy. Anyway, thanks so much feared or loved!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Indian Summer

This might have been short - but it's my favorite of the three.  This is not to say shared showers don't have their appeal - because c'mon...but this was just so incredibly sweet.

There is something to be said for hand holding.

Happy birthday to ME!  Thank you, thank you thank you!!  Btw - you can throw away the receipt.  I won't be returning my gift. :)



Author's Response: Had an inkling that would be your fave...and I think my position on hand holding is abundantly clear, LOL. Thrilled you liked these...might be the gift that keeps on giving - I just need to stop being so damn distracted all the time and finish the others. Happy, happy, my dear (and of course, thanks much!)

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 05:58 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

St. Jim of Irish Spring? Classic!  As always colette, your stuff is the thing with which romance is crafted from!  Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Glad you liked that nutty name...wondered if it would make sense to anyone but me, LOL. Thanks so much, StarryDreamer...shouldn't be too long before a couple more are fully cooked.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 05:36 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

So happy to see something new from you!!  Wonderful little looks into their new life together....this is what I hope Season 4 is all about.  Sadly, no shower time, though.  Thank goodness for fic!  Can't wait to read more:)



Author's Response: Well, so happy to see a review from you! (Wouldn't mind a new fic either, ahem...) Yeah, sadly no shower-cam in their future, LOL. And I agree - in S4 they don't need any wild, farfetched plots; they just need to be. Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and, not least of all, rec'ing bitterpill

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 05:26 pm Title: Shiny When Wet

Snippets are really sooo good.  I'm glad you decided to share now than save it all up for later.  :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured what the hell...I can always make more, LOL. Thanks, as ever, Mox!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Gary Cooper

please write more... it's good medicine, your little oneshots. i love how you capture these plain, ordinary moments and turn them into gold.


Author's Response: Glad to hear these worked for you...and that ordinary isn't too boring! Thanks much, StarShine!

Reviewer: faceglow Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2007 04:39 pm Title: Gary Cooper

Each of them made me smile in their own special way. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: So happy to make you smile...Thanks, faceglow!

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