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Reviewer: injoy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10, 2007 08:20 pm Title: The Attempted Break-up / Ryan and Kelly

just, um, you need to take a read of this, get the perspective down.  swings between third and first person.  could be better if you get a bead on it.


Author's Response: you are so right! I get lazy about getting my stuff beta-ed, even though I soo need it! I will try to fix this up so it's not so grammatically incorrect. Thanks again for reading!

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