Reviews For The Bump
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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

i loved it, really, but honestly, pam would NEVER tell the cameras about her being pregnant before telling jim

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2007 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

*thunk*  That was utterly brilliant.  Absolutely true to the show itself.  Every aspect.  Are you sure you didn't steal a script from the writer's room?

Author's Response: oh my goodness - thank you! maybe i did steal a script. whoops :)

Reviewer: padaleckrasinski Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

pure genius.

"Pam, are you with child?" love it.



Author's Response: it was so hard for me to get michael's voice! glad you liked.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

:D. This is so sweet and happy. I have a huge happy grin

Author's Response: ohh yay! glad you liked :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this.  So sweet and so in-character. 

Author's Response: aw, gee, thanks! i wrote this on the beach not too long ago - it was just a fun bit and i'm glad to see people liked it!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1

Hee, how cute! Of course, Beesly women must have extremely easy first trimesters if Jim hasn't noticed (says the woman who is thanking God on her knees that she's finally in her fourth month).  Still, this is so cute! Great contribution to the challenge.

Author's Response: Well thank you! And congrats on your baby – how exciting.

Author's Response: Well thank you! And congrats on your baby – how exciting.

Reviewer: sweetchariots Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Love the "talking heads". Absolutely adorable!

Author's Response: I had a hard time with the formatting, so I’m glad it worked out. Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2007 03:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Ah, cupcake kick!  Kevin's talking head works particularly well here.  Nice story.


Author's Response: As someone who’s always on a cupcake kick (but not pregnant), it was great to plug that in, and I’m glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so cute! Kevin's Talkinghead was spot-on!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I had such a fun time writing Kevin...

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

shut. up. she told the cameras before she told Jim!!!! that's awesome. and precious. and sweet. and fluffy. and i love it :) 

Author's Response: One of the things I like about Pam is that thoughts tend to tumble out of her mouth – sometimes in front of a camera. It’s an entirely endearing quality, and I just liked the idea of it so much. I’m glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is really sweet, and it feels very in-character. I hope we get to see something like this on the show! Nice job!

Author's Response: What a compliment – thank you!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2007 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well, that's simply fantastic.  I especially love the Kevin part.  Gawwwwd, Kevin!  So great.


Author's Response: I don't know if this is too self-congratulatory, but I love the Kevin part too. That was probably one of the first things in my head when I started writing this. Thanks for the feedback!

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