Date: March 16, 2010 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Just re-read this. Over two years later and it's still hot as hell and just so, so good. I love this insecure version of Jim. He's trying so hard not to let the past bother him. Wish you would be moved to write more fic. Your stories are among my favorites.
Date: April 29, 2009 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Shew Lawdy! I'm a late reader here - this was recommended over on the MTT forum and I'm so glad. I don't think you made Jim too needy at all - I think having him be jealous (just once!) and turning into Caveman!Jim staking his territory is not that huge of a stretch. And even if it is a stretch, I certainly enjoyed reading about it. *grin* Thank you.
Date: September 09, 2008 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I know you wrote this forever ago but I have to say I've read this about a dozen times and it's always amazing. Very realistic and Jim's not needy at all-- this seems exactly like the kind of thing that would come up from time to time. Like Everybody Hurts said, InCharge!Jim-- guh.
Date: October 23, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I just re-read this ... sorry for the late review, but that was hot. Jim's jealously coming to the surface while he stuggles to hide it is very realistic. And Jim didn't seem needy at all to me. He seemed insistent, possessive, territorial, and even insecure ... but all completely HOT! Good job.
Author's Response: Hey, a late review is an awesome surprise. Thanks! :)
Date: September 23, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't blush, because you did a great job with this story. I agree that with their long history, there will be moments of insecurity for both of them. Of course, Jim's going to get jealous seeing Pam and Roy together at a wedding; it's not exactly his fondest memory.
Nothing hotter than InCharge!Jim. "Say my name." guh.
Date: September 23, 2007 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mang, that was hot. You know, I didn't read Jim as needy here at all. It was a little bit of macho Jim wanting to plant his, um, flag and stake his claim and make sure they both know who belongs to whom now. Very nice.