Date: October 20, 2007 11:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Perfect first date for them. I like that he talked about going away (because they needed to talk about such things). I imagine the "What" and "Nothing" so be like after the Dundies when Pam was drunk. Lovely story.
Date: September 30, 2007 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This is so simple, so beautiful. "Desperately hopeful" and "boyish and awkward, composed mostly of limbs" are just...wow. Perfect descriptions. I wish there were more, but this is lovely in itself.
9 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, that was adorable! Random, yet searching. The tiny details give the story an odd charm. Great job, and a great ending.
8 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This, him them. Perfect. I loved this glimpse into their first date!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. this was so simple and sweet and i loved it and its just so.... wow. i think i am in love with this.
9 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 11:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Your second paragraph really brings across the fine line Pam may have been walking there -- can she take anything he's just said at face value, or is he just tipsy/euphoric/post-breakup upset? The next paragraph reinforces the uncertainty before thee fourth gives us the relief of a corner turned, a path chosen.
Extremely insightful, as always :)