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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This line was so completely perfect - "I asked Halpert to keep an eye on her. Turns out he had been all along." 

Author's Response: Thanks! Roy deserves to lose her if he's paying that little attention to Pam and her feelings.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

 I asked Halpert to keep an eye on her. Turns out he had been all along.

Excellent line.

 You capture the obtuse, simple nature of Roy really well here. What does Pam see in him?



Author's Response:

Thanks - all I can say is Pam must have the lowest self-esteem in the world to stay with Roy when Jim is right there waiting!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

"I asked Halpert to keep an eye on her. Turns out he had been all along." *sigh* This made me feel very sorry for Roy, but he should've put more effort into Pam. So in the end, your loss, Roy! Lol, I liked this.

Author's Response:

Right on! Maybe this season Roy will finally pay for his lack of effort. I hope!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good perspective from Roy, though I think he is really more clueless.

Author's Response: Oh, I think he's completely clueless but I was trying to give him the benefit of the doubt this time!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh, I like it.  I do think that Roy is just oblivious, not a bad guy...but he's really oblivious.

I liked this: I asked Halpert to keep an eye on her. Turns out he had been all along.  Because, honestly, that line always makes me laugh a little; it's such a good example of just how oblivious he is.



Author's Response:

Right? I mean how oblivious do you have to be to leave Pam alone with Jim, wearing that dress with a couple drinks in her! Jim who is everyone's "who would you do?" pick!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Mel60 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 10:10 am Title: Chapter 1

This is great and very true to a Roy's voice.  Roy is that typical guy that oversimplifies things and really wouldn't see why things happened this way.  Nicely Done.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's how I feel about Roy - he just goes on instinct and never really asks "why". Thanks for your thoughts!

Reviewer: Token Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2006 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow... really well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! Was I too mean to Roy?

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