Date: October 15, 2007 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Ah. Lovely. I think the voice could be either of them, too. Very nice.
Date: September 30, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! Cute! I'm so glad they've finally figured it out, and I can totally see Pam thinking this way. Nice job, MA!
Author's Response: I'm glad they figured it out too! Thanks, Azlin!
Date: September 30, 2007 05:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! I'm as anxious as the next girl to see some real passion between these two, but the hand-holding is just...ahhhh. I think this is just what Pam would be thinking.
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetpea! Little gestures are so important between these two because they always wanted to be closer for so long. They had to avoid touching each other in previous seasons, so now, hand holding can say so much. :)
Date: September 30, 2007 04:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw. Absolutely in the joyful spirit of the premiere...I think they're just so relieved and hopeful and grateful to be where they are, after all their history. And you capture that so simply here - lovely, MA. Glad you decided to post it.
Author's Response: I was trying to capture the excitement of a new relationship, and I'm glad it worked for you. Thanks, colette! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like she's really hungry. Glad to see something by you. :) Nice little moment.
Author's Response: Hee. Thank you, Mr. Swedge. This first episode seems to have inspired me so hopefully, I will continue to write little stories. :)
Date: September 29, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
gosh that must be how she's feeling! Love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
*happy sigh* so simple, so sweet. it makes me so happy.
Author's Response: Thank you! It makes me happy to think about them being happy. :)
Date: September 29, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is beautiful
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)