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Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 12:43 pm Title: FTW!!

This was a great way to tie up the story. I loved reading it from beginning to end.

I don't know what a happy ending is. Life isn't about endings is it? It's a series of moments, and…it's like if you turn the camera off, it's not an ending is it? I'm still here, my life's not over. Come back here in ten years, see how I'm doing then. Because I could be married with kids, you don't know. Life just goes on. 

I love this reference to the UK The Office.
This was just awesome.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 12:21 pm Title: FTW!!

Just absolutely beautiful, M. I'll miss it.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 12:18 pm Title: FTW!!

Ok, I'm going to totally embarass myself by saying this, but I got a little teary eyed at the end there. I mean, I didn't actually cry or anything, but I felt the stinging. I'm gonna miss this story. And I LOVED that you included stuff from the British Office. It really does fit together quite nicely.

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 12:10 pm Title: FTW!!

Squee!!!!!

Reviewer: Madison Desdemona Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 10:50 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

ohhhhhhhhhhh...... who wants to play it by ear? We sure don't want them too!! Yikes. I want them to meet in real life. They need it and so do we!! And i know its not really a cliffhanger, but it still sorta is. Great great chapter!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 09:55 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

Awww. Now he just has to find the yogurt lid and all will be right with the world!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 09:52 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

This is absolutely brillant. Great job.

Reviewer: amy_hates_greenbeans Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 07:15 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

This was amazing. CONTINUE. NOW. thanksmuch. :)

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 07:06 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

ok, i read the first 20 chapters in one sitting a couple days ago, and when i went to comment the page wouldn't load! so here we go: this story is amazing!! i literally just sat in one spot for like 4 hours and read through it. all the angst actually gave me a tummy ache! anyway, i'm in sitting in the school library where i should be writing an essay, but i just had to check to see if you updated and you did!! haha, sorry, i'm rambling, i just love this story so much! ok i'll stop now.... can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Pamcakes Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 06:27 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

Yay!!!

I love. More please!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 05:48 am Title: TTYL

Gah.  I am having trouble finding my words.  Soooooooooo gooooooooooood.

Reviewer: Andys_Gal Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 04:50 am Title: TTYL

Dear lord the angst! This has GOT to be cleared up! Although I wouldn't be opposed to Jim and Pam running away to Chicago and living happily ever after since it's my favorite city on Earth. Could Jim ever be a Cubs fan?

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 04:16 am Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

PAM!  Get in your car & go to Philadelphia!  NOW!

Love this: that monumental night in our lives has a fucking title -- gah!  So true!

Thanks for updating so quickly.  {{{{HUGS}}}} 

Reviewer: thirtypercent Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15, 2007 12:31 am Title: TTYL

This has definitely become my top "is it updated yet?  how about now?  ... now?" story.  I'm in suspense here!

And this part:

I wanted it to be you so badly. I didn’t want to have that kind of connection with anyone else. I didn’t want anyone else to understand me the way she did. The night we…you know? Got a little carried away? It was all you. You were who I saw. It was you I wanted to touch. I wanted you, Pam. 

Yowza.  That whole part of the conversation was so intense and sad and hopeful at the same time.  So... I think it's great.  Thanks for writing :)

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 10:59 pm Title: TTYL

you are AWESOME. especially because you didn't end it there. cuz otherwise, i would have had to throw my computer against the wall. 

i'm just saying. ^_^ 

Reviewer: Alie_Woos Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 10:51 pm Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

have we mentioned how much you rock? because you do.. guh.. one more.. ::sniff::

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 10:31 pm Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

I sat down tonight to study for a philosophy exam I have coming up on Monday. I have all my notes spread out, books and highlighters in hand, but I remembered I need to send an email to my mom. I open the internet and the MTT recent page opens, too (it's one of my homepages). And BOOM, there you are with a new chapter, and BOOM, there go my notes to the side as I lean forward to devour every word on the page. Twice.

SO good! I love the tension you've maintained throughout this story, and your handling of the characters is so thoughtful and delicate. You really have a lot to be proud of here, and I know we're all on the edges of our seats, still leaning forward, waiting to see what happens next! -CH

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 10:20 pm Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

Okay, I can't remember if I reviewed your last chapter or not, but if I didn't it was great... I like the way you wrote this, and I can't wait for Jim to find the yogurt lid... Although, I do think it's somewhat silly they were talking online when they could be talking on the phone (what both seem to want to do more). I don't know! but i'm ready for the next chapter!

Reviewer: twentythree Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 10:17 pm Title: {{{{{HUGS}}}}}}

Is it a little pathetic that I stayed up this late, hoping for a new installment, especially when I have to be up in 5 hours?? If it pathetic, then I am just happy being that way. I loveloveLOVE the way you incorporated elements from the season that we've known and adjusted them to fit. It really works, and when this story ends, I will be so very sad. 

Reviewer: nillabean Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 02:26 pm Title: WTG!!!!

Aaahhh!!! I can't believe I'm at the end of Ch. 20 already! Thank you for doing such an artfull, thoughtful job with this story. You've done a fantastic job of integrating real events and dialogue with the AU storyline (Pam's speech, in particular). Most impressive. Oh, and in case we don't see him or hear from him again, Brian was a great character. He was just what Pam needed; a much better choice than Roy. :) Thanks again--can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: nillabean Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 12:40 pm Title: CYA

Ouch! Boy this chapter was a tough one to read. It hurts my heart (and my grief bone) to see Jim be so overtly cold to Pam. But, as ever, your writing of this story rocks. Good job.

Reviewer: nillabean Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 09:35 am Title: EMAIL

Great story so far! I'm not even halfway through the posted chapters yet and I can tell I'm going to sit here until I've read them all. Seriously, terrific attention to detail, and Pam's and Jim's voices are spot on. Okay, going back to read now! :)

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 09:01 am Title: WTG!!!!

So, I don't know what kind of magic you do, exactly, but this... this is amazing. You've basically reinvented one of the greatest episodes (for me), in a most perfect way. Fantastic merge of cannon events with AU, and a lovely online community you've invented here, as well. Bravo!!

 

And, you know, can you just write the rest all in about the next 10 minutes? I'm dying here... 



Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for the kind review. I'm so glad you liked it.  I actually tried working on the story during some off time today and just couldn't get it to flow. Maybe I'm having a hard time getting in JIM's head. I hope to have something for all of you soon!

Reviewer: AvilaGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14, 2007 04:16 am Title: WTG!!!!

Wow! *NICE*! My only problem was that it was a little confusing at the end. I thought Pam was whispering all of that to Jim, but then PamPong (haha) knew what she'd said. Then I went back and I thought maybe you meant she was typing it all in the chat, which makes a bit more sense and is actually really cool--I love how you incorporated Beach Games into it so well. I can't wait to see what the fruits of the blinking cursor are! Maybe tonight or tomorrow? Hehe! I LOVE THIS STORY! its seriously my guilty pleasure.

Reviewer: raok Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2007 11:06 pm Title: WTG!!!!

goodness i LOVE this story.. with only 2 chapters left I can't wait to see where it goes :x

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