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Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2018 06:04 pm Title: Part One

My god this one is amazing. Money is one of my all-time favorite episodes because it hits on so many insecurities with this gang in such a raw way. We got to see Dwight and Michael unfold, but that “kiss about Italian food” had so much going on that we didn’t get. Until this. 🙂👏 I know it’s been over a decade since this was published but it is so wonderful. Thank you!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Part One

Very, very intense.  Love how Pam had to wait for the perfect moment to tell Jim she loved him too because she needed him to know that she really meant it.  Great job with this.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Part One

“I told him it was hard to see the woman you love with someone else.” He said it freely, with conviction, and the way he looked at her after held no ill will or challenge—just honesty and wanting. Wanting her to know. Wanting her to realize that this, that she, was everything. Everything to him."  That was so beautifully written.  As was the sex, and as was  "When they came, him shortly after her, he wondered if he would ever just feel content this close to her—instead of so lucky. And thankful." 

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 01:22 pm Title: Part One

Wow. I have read this four times already. You are quickly becoming my favorite author. The idea that Pam would feel like her "I love you" was inadequate because of the ones Jim heard her waste on Roy, was just .... so eye-opening, but also so goddamn true and relatable. A++!!!!

Reviewer: downtown Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 11:39 am Title: Part One

this is ridiculously beautiful. sigh.

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 08:57 am Title: Part One

There is just so much genuine emotion in this it's just... guh. The perfect kind of smuttiness to follow the shear emotion of that last scene in Money.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2007 06:59 am Title: Part One

Ugh.  This was so good.  It was hot and sweet and emotional.  Great job! 

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 10:50 pm Title: Part One

God damn.

Reviewer: Carolynfromla Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Part One

Amazing. You are my favorite author on this site!

Reviewer: Carolynfromla Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Part One

Amazing. You are my favorite author on this site!

Author's Response: Yay! That's never bad to hear.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 08:30 pm Title: Part One

Just read this for the third time.  It's so seriously great.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Part One

Of course I can't say the word "passionate" anymore without thinking of Italian food, but it's the word that comes to mind after reading this. It was passionate and lovely, and I'm going to read it again right now...

Reviewer: MelissaKrasinski Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Part One

I seriously cried. This story is so good. I'd give you a rating of 100 if I could. I LOVE it. :D

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks! 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 20, 2007 05:35 pm Title: Part One

Wow beruco, non-smutty smut with feelings!  You may just be the master of the MA story.  All of them are ahem, interesting.  That goes without saying.  But what I really admire is that you can write dirty smut, playful smut, sad smut, and as displayed here, romantic/theraputic smut.  Well done!  I'm always excited to see a new story from you. 

Author's Response: I just can't seem to write over a thousand words without a couple of them exploring Pam/Jim's sex life. But I'm glad you enjoy!

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