Date: October 23, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Ryan, you oblivious asshole. I do have a soft spot in my heart for Ryan/Karen though, so I can't be too harsh with him ;) Nice job with this, you really captured his mindset, especially with him still being nervous under it all with Karen near the beginning, afraid she wouldn't show up.
Author's Response: ryan/karen, huh? i definitely get that... i think they fit well, i just don't know how to write it (well, outside of drabble format). thanks for the feedback!