1 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2023 03:38 am Title: The Man, the Oath
Great backstory for the early stages of Pam and Roy's relationship and the beginning of Jim's tenure at Dunder Mifflin.
Date: January 23, 2008 07:02 pm Title: The Man, the Oath
You really have a way with words. That was just lovely.
8 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 06:11 pm Title: The Man, the Oath
This was so very lovely.
This part seemed so Roy and actually brought tears to my eyes:
You call your mom right there at the dinner table. Roy declines to call his parents: “They already knew I was going to ask you, babe.”
They didn’t know I would say yes, you want to point out."
Date: October 28, 2007 01:28 am Title: The Man, the Oath
You write beautifully. A man told me once that he woulld be my family...his words made me tear up a little, and so did "it is not the oath that makes us believe the man, but the man the oath". Thanks.
9 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 09:10 pm Title: The Man, the Oath
oooh. i like narrative in this one a lot, especially the look back into pam's past.
10 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 07:16 am Title: The Man, the Oath
So much I love about this. "He must be smiling with the side of his mouth that you can’t see." So simple, but it blows me away. Also--"Promises aren’t real, because they’re too easily made. Anything can be a promise: a look, or a smile, or the gentle way Jim laughs sometimes when you make love...(Especially that.)" You are fast becoming one of my favorite authors. Great job.
Date: October 26, 2007 07:01 am Title: The Man, the Oath
I have to say, I really enjoyed this oneshot. It just spoke volumes.
I think I might be in love with Jim...
10 [Report This]Date: October 25, 2007 07:01 pm Title: The Man, the Oath
Oh! I love the way you write. Your words are so... lyrical, if that makes any sense. I love how real this story is.
Promises may not be real, but heartbeats are.
What a breathtaking line. Wonderful work!