Date: May 23, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Night Out to Goodbye Toby
Ha. "What was their problem?"
In Job Fair, nice allusion to "why wouldn't you tell her that?"
Goodbye, Toby - Gah! Stupid contrivances!
Nice job with this fic, CallofDuty.
Date: May 23, 2008 01:41 pm Title: Branch Wars to Chair Model
The Chair Model made me laugh. What if she had said 'yes' before he finished? Would he have gone through with the "while I tie my shoe" business? Maybe we could have avoided the non-proposal. You misspelled 'tongue,' though.
I also enjoyed Branch Wars quite a bit, and Survivor Man is perfect. "They'd talked about this." Ha!
Date: May 23, 2008 01:36 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad
Nice. I like Local Ad the best (Creed!), but also I like how you made Phyllis deliberately misspell 'Launch.'
I don't know if you want to mention anywhere that it's haiku. You did a nice job fitting thoughts/scenes into that form.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2008 07:31 am Title: Night Out to Goodbye Toby
Excellent job! Really impressive to be able to sum up an episode in three little lines.
8 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2008 07:03 pm Title: Night Out to Goodbye Toby
I adore the Goodbye Toby one! Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Branch Wars to Chair Model
"He pulled the wrong file.
MR. A. KNIFE? Toby sighed.
They'd talked about this."
this one is definitely my favorite. toby is hysterical. i actually read this quite a while ago and added it to my favorites and then i was sitting here and i remembered that bit and it made me laugh again so i set off to find it and now i'm leaving a review to let you know that i love this.
7 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2007 02:37 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad
So Phyllis misspelled launch on purpose? Brilliant! These are fun.
Date: October 26, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Fun Run to Local Ad
i love that your blip from local ad is about CREED! i really love all of these, it's pretty cool. they're some of my favorite moments from these episodes. Jan's feet on the train were seriously one of the sweetest things i've ever seen. i like this :)