Date: December 09, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
This whole story is freaking adorable! And I love the idea that Pam was ignoring Jim so she could try to get her relationship with Roy back on track. And it keeps with the very sweet & nostalgic mood of the story (summer in DE, old-fashioned 5 & Dime, melting ice cream), that the final scene is left to our imaginations. I'm so glad I saw the rec for this on the FF home page!
Date: October 23, 2006 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6
They stayed out there until the sun rose and the surfers took over their beach. They fell asleep using their sweaters as pillows, and each other as blankets.
Well, this is a disappointment. You did a great job of the build-up, but then left the conclusion of your story to our imaginations. It feels like you chickened out here. I don't necessarily need a graphic play-by-play, but this is so generic I can't even tell if Pam and Jim are supposed to have had sex. As I said, a disappointment. Lovemaking on the beach would have been a sweet reward for all their angst.
Date: October 23, 2006 04:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Her hand was free for only a split second, though, before Jim took it back. Pam’s heart felt like it jumped into her throat. Whatever was happening between them, it was definitely no longer about safety.
This is so sweet, and so in character for these two. Well d one!
Date: July 11, 2006 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was just great!!!