Date: February 24, 2008 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I've got a lot of things to say, and I'm trying to figure out which to say first.
Okay, so I read this off of a recommendation on the forums. Money is my favorite episode thus far of the entire series, so I'm always quite excited to read post-Money fic.
Yours was the best I've ever read. So adorable. So appropriate and true to the nature of the episode. And did I mention, so adorable?
LOVED IT :DDDD
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
as much as i loved the original scene i would def. not have minded this one one bit :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what a perfect little story. Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
Date: October 30, 2007 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
PERFECT!! Honestly, I didn't think the scene could have gone any better on the show, with them having Jim come out to comfort Dwight...but this was such an awesome "alternative ending" so to speak. I could totally see this having been the trigger for Pam telling Jim she loved him. When/if it does happen I hope the writers handle it as well as you just did! FABULOUSLY done.
Date: October 30, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww that end bit was gorgeous! This was a great story.
Date: October 30, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww! I loved what was in the episdoe, but this was really cute :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was cute! I mean, I love the original, but this would have been great too!
Date: October 30, 2007 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1
He leaned down, playing like he was telling her a secret. “I love you, too.”
So freaking good.
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 10:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Awwww... Ya know, that was really sweet. It makes me think how similar Dwight + Pam's situations kinda are/were.. compared to Jim + Dwight. I didn't quite understand why what Jim said made Dwight "come back". I like the dialogue you made. Good work :)
Date: October 30, 2007 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww! Maybe it would have been better if Pam went. Her situation was a bit more similar than Jim's... Though Jim/Dwight love is hard to resist. Ooooh, I hope we get to see the first time Pam tells Jim she loves him!!! This was very sweet. Thank you for sharing it.
Date: October 30, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really awesome. In a lot of ways I think a scene like that would have made more sense than the one with Jim.
Date: October 30, 2007 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Ok, now that I've gotten that out of my system... great idea! I love it from this perspective. More, almost, then how it really happened on the show. Good work!
Date: October 30, 2007 06:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay! I really liked it. It made me smile. Pam's spill was very realistic.
Date: October 30, 2007 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED THAT !
it's probably exactly how that would have turned out if they made Pam go into the stairwell.
it made my stomach feel all fluttery inside ! (x
Date: October 30, 2007 06:23 am Title: Chapter 1
As much as I loved hearing Jim talk to Dwight I would have also loved to see this really happen. You captured what Pam was probably thinking. I loved it!