10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 10:31 pm Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
Oh my god! I love this fic. it's so relatable and real. The ONLY thing that I disagree with is that all penises are "freaking ugly" although they ARE freaking ugly when they're flaccid.
Other than that, this story was so incredibly SPOT ON. I almost wish you'd continue it until the sex gets better. That way, maybe it will give me some hope...
8 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 10:28 pm Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
I enjoyed the sense of reality--everytime you have sex isn't going to be mind blowing...especially the first time it's with that person...
Good job :-)
Date: October 30, 2007 10:21 pm Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
Yay, Daoust! I so hope that thats not what happened on their first time but it was hilarious. My favorite part: they're all freaking ugly. Hah.
Awesome, Daoust. Go NA-ers!
Author's Response: Thanks very much, lemonade. I'm glad you liked it. In your butt. TWSS.
Date: October 30, 2007 01:55 pm Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
HAHA I laughed out loud at the part about him drooling all over her boobs and pinching them too hard. ... only because its true :( Jim's a man, and few men are conscientious sex gods. The end.
Author's Response:
Jim's a man, and few men are conscientious sex gods. The end.
Ha ha. So true. Where do you think I got all my material from???
Date: October 30, 2007 11:34 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
Thank you for writing the first real, honest portrayal of what JAM sex is actually like. Everyone describes them as the most "real fictional couple" so it doesn't make sense that they would have earth-shattering, orchestra-swelling sex.
This was excellent, I hope to read more from you soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Wendy. A compliment from such a respected fanfic writer as yourself is very much appreciated, obviously. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: October 30, 2007 09:01 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
Very funny - a great antidote to all the sugary perfection stories out there.
Author's Response: Thanks Carolyn. I am surprised that there aren't many anti-sugar perfection stories out there. Surely this isn't the first. Anyway. Thank you for your kind review.
Date: October 30, 2007 08:55 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
THIS WAS AWFUL!!!! Though I think that's what you intended, so job well done! It was really funny, too. It's gonna disturb a lot of Jammer's out there. But that's okay, I know in my heart of hearts that Jim is a sex god. Oh, and favorite line: "Anything to get Edward Scissorhands out of there" LOL!
Author's Response: LOL. Great review. You had me worried there for a second, because I thought you really did hate it. But I'm glad you didn't. I don't want to disturb too many Jammers out there, but I wouldn't mind if they laughed. So anyway, thanks for the kind words.
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 07:46 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
Yay! So good to see something else from you. And HA! What a something else this was :) That was awesome. I loved it. The entire narration was done so well. And it just was a really nice change of pace of the usual first time stories that have floated around.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad to be back on the wagon again. Thanks for your support and encouragement.
Date: October 30, 2007 07:15 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
this was HYSTERICAL!!!!
we all know that we've had those moments. reading this def made me think of my own intimate faux pas-es (i'm sure i didn't word that right, lol); i look back on them with amusement and fondness. great work. :-D
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, MBJ. Your kindness is much appreciated. Trust me, I had a lot of personal experience to draw upon for this little story. An embarrasing amount, really. But we've all been there. We all understand.
Date: October 30, 2007 06:48 am Title: The Beginning, The Climax and The Ending
HAHA! What an excellent contrast to all the fairy tale JAM fic that's out there. Unfortunately, yes... this is probably much closer to reality.
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind review, Pamcakes. I appreciate your having taken the time to read my story.