Reviews For Almost right
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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2021 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

OUCH. But I love the juxtaposition of Pam's fantasies and the cold reality she's refused to acknowledge, and the wedding v. Casino Night/man she tells herself she loves v. man she really loves parallels. It's really well constructed.

Author's Response: I had entirely forgotten this one! It’s a fun tiny thing isn’t it? Thank you!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2009 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

this was incredible. so much in so little. i love how we think at first one thing, but then it happens to be another. great writing style - very intriguing!

Author's Response: Old story, and old comment, but I still check! Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Man, I almost cried with this one. It was almost right, except it was all wrong. But it will be right again soon. I know it. (the riht being marriage. cause obviously they are already together, so that part of right is already right!)

Author's Response:

Yep, they are well on their way to making everything right again. And thank goodness their friendship didn't really end, it just took a detour.

Reviewer: kony5669 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

well, i'm not good at complimenting technical aspects of fanfics...so all i can say is... i LOVED it! :P

Author's Response: Thank you! Getting an emotional response is really my goal. I appreciate your appreciation! :)

Reviewer: The Scarlet Pervygirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, that's *good.*  Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: tlace Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2006 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Well, this made me cry.  Which is a compliment.  Bittersweet and lovely.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Sorry about the tears, though!

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 09:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Unh. Love the parallel style here. Fantastic. So much with so little. The Angela in me loves your efficiency ;)



Author's Response: I'm trying to learn that less is more- something you are very good at!  Thank you.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Very powerful mini-fic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

So very sad.

Author's Response:

Thank you. Sorry.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2006 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1

this was a beautiful, sad, strong punch in the gut. loved the structure.

Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry about your gut.

Reviewer: lano Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2006 12:55 am Title: Chapter 1

"She was radiant, but her dress was lavender-blue." *Sniff* 

I know they're not real, but how sad would it be for these people to not even be friends?  Guh. 



Author's Response: I'm holding out for "happily-ever-after" myself, but this just hit me. Yeah, it would be an awful loss.

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just died a little inside. That was so sad, yet so beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Sorry about the dying, though.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1

I didn't expect it to end like it did.  So very sad. Unless their friendship ended because they are now lovers?  No? That's not what you meant?  Sigh...



Author's Response: I'm usually an optimist, but the angst got the better of me this time...

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 26, 2006 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww...that's so sad.  Great parallelism!

Author's Response: Thank you. It made me sad, too.

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