Date: October 01, 2008 02:26 pm Title: A Bad Idea
“You cannot come home with me,” Angela finally said, trying to keep her voice even. “My cats have conjunctivitis, and I only have one set of goggles.”
If you wrote a ghost script to apply for a writing job for The Office, and this line was in it, you'd totally be hired.
Date: February 07, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Pam Pong
Be aggressive! Be, be aggressive!
And you ended it with Dwight/Angela. How did you know?
This was so much fun. I haven't been reading much fanfiction lately, but I'm so glad I forayed into it again for this. Wonderful characterizations, hilarious, sweet, fitting! Thanks very much for sharing.
Date: February 07, 2008 01:57 pm Title: Quake
I love the way this transitions so easily between seriousness and the funny bits -- of which there are many, by the way. The part about Pam helping buy her own ring but still not wanting Jim to tell her it was all a waste -- I love the realism of it. That was probably my favorite part of this chapter, which is saying something because I laughed straight out loud at least three times.
Hooray for chaptered stories! Onward!
Date: February 07, 2008 01:18 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh lord. I wasn't sure if I was going to review, but I have to now. How could I pass up the opportunity to quote hilarious lines back to the author? Like the one about Angela's frown deepening (in emotional intensity!) and her cats' pink eye and the goggles and Angela and Pam being 'girls' and nnnngggh. What fun!
Date: December 19, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Pam Pong
This was a great story, shan! And this line? So true:
It was probably more painless that it happened now than it would have been if I’d waited until a month before my wedding.
Ah, so much heartache and angst would have been avoided. Oh well. As long as they're together now, that's what counts.
Looking foward to more of your ABC/CIA fic soon. :)
Date: December 18, 2007 11:01 pm Title: A Bad Idea
and OMG!!! nerfherder? super kudos for bringing star wars into this! "who's scruffy looking????"
Date: December 18, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Pam Pong
hahaha shan! awesome blossom! loved it. way to end the story told thru angela. good way to bring it full circle. nice!!!
sorry you finals ate you. have a good break tho!
Date: December 17, 2007 11:26 pm Title: Pam Pong
HEAL THE SICK PUPPIES!!! Oh, Shan...this is, so, so good I can't stand it, and yet I'm so sorry to see it go! You've got these voices down to a 'T'. And when Dwight asked for the name of who'd "done this" to Angela I nearly spit my water out all over my monitor. This was such a great take on what may have happened if TO hadn't taken SO long t get our favorite duo together. This just rocked my socks.
Date: December 17, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Pam Pong
i can't even describe how much i love your writing of angela. spot on? perfection? hilarious? amazing? brilliant? hmmm... i'll go with all of the above. this story is fabulous, and i'm so glad you got the chance to finish it! i actually snorted when i read “I don’t need morality lessons from a tramp, Pam.”
Date: December 17, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Pam Pong
What a happy surprise to see another chapter to this story! Nice way to bring it back again to Angela's perspective, however warped it might be. ;-)
Looking forward to more of your creations now that you'll have some more free time!
Date: December 17, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Pam Pong
WOW! I LOVED this whole story !And I have to say best line ever:
"Dear lord! She left a drunk and clearly amorous woman on the doorstep of an untrustworthy doe-eyed rogue."
I completly bent over laughing at that line!