Date: November 11, 2007 07:40 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Okay that chapter was AMAZING [Kelly/]!!!!! WOW. I seriously got so caught up in it, I felt like it was so real and true to each of their characters, especially Jim's, you captured him perfectly. Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: I'm so glad it felt real! Thanks, nan :)
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 07:26 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
OMG. I thought you did a great job writing Angela, but you did a zillion times better writing that scene in Jim's bedroom. Wow. Wow. WOW.
Author's Response: Yayyyy! Thanks again! I got wowed!
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 07:11 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Awesome chapter!! You must be channeling Angela! And this line was so funny - "And to do so by throwing herself at a mischief-making slacker in perpetual need of a haircut!"
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks! Heavy use of a thesaurus was helpful for writing Angela :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Catalyst
Well, this is just great. I sit down to try and work on a new chapter for my story, and I see that you've updated this one. So, naturally, I have to open it up and read it immediately, and of course it's sixteen flavors of amazing, and there's even pictures...
Eff.
And now I don't even know if I can write tonight. All I want to do is just re-read this brilliance again and again. Have I favorited it? I really need to favorite this.
Do me a favor, okay? Don't ever stop being so talented. :)
Author's Response:
LOL! Mose, your reviews are amazing!! Wow, wow, wow! Thank you!
p.s. You can expect an email from me soon :)
Date: November 11, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Catalyst
okay, now a new chapter would be nice.
Author's Response: Lol, probably not though. School owns me this week :(
Date: November 11, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Catalyst
“Really? What part of kissing me three times tonight will be less weird if we talk about it?” he snaps.
Ouch Jim. And OH MY GOD I cannot believe you added a visual for Angela & her cat!! I totally had that as a comment (befoer I finished reading) that visuals are a wonderful thing!!! Wow. You rock. And that pic is hilarious.
And the end? Whew. Wow. Um so great. I hope Pam leaves Roy for good!! I love the part where Pam and Jim are trying to act like nothing has happenened (v. s2) and then they just can't take it anymore
And reviews preventing global warming? Well I guess I'm just doing my part to help save the world :D
Besies you rock at fic and life. Lovely lovely job, Cannot wait for mroe shan.
Author's Response: No, you rock WBJ! I love your reviews! I'm glad you appreciate the artistic genius of my drawing. Hehe. Nice work helping the environment!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Catalyst
Gosh, I love this story. I love it like...I don't know, I want to avoid a cheesy Pam and Jim cliche, so I won't say it! But hee, maybe ya know what I mean ;) ANYWAY, I really, really hope we see another update soon because I want to see what happens and it's all about me!! Okay, not really but uh...another update soon? Please?
Author's Response:
LOL! Who doesn't love a cheesy cliche? Let loose with it :)
I have a term paper due on Thursday... but maybe you'll have ch4 after that.
Date: November 11, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Catalyst
Oh my god is right! (Best Dundies EVER!)
Way to go Jim, for not letting Pam brush it all off to being drunk. If only...
Author's Response: I know, right? Don't you want a season 2 time machine sometimes? Heh. Thanks for reviewing, lisa!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Catalyst
I love this story! Please keep going, and soon! You're capturing the emotions brilliantly. I'm mesmerized.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Annika!
9 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:31 pm Title: Catalyst
Thank you, thank you, thank you shan21 for ending fic!drought of the week!! This installment was just fabulous, and I really enjoyed the steady way you built (and maintained) the tension. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter; don't make us wait too long!
PS--The picture kicks ass, too. -CH
Author's Response:
My very first fanart review! *blushes* Thanks! I am a slightly better colorer than the four-year-old I was watching. Slightly.
I hope I can keep the tension up in chapter 4 :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Catalyst
Heehee...adorable!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: November 11, 2007 06:30 pm Title: Catalyst
You are so amazing. And so is this story. It's so gooooooooood.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks nbyevu :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:23 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
…Umm, yeah. Ending there is evil. Don’t be evil.
Update soon please. I await eagerly on the edge of my seat: Will Pam be honest to Jim? Will Angela send Dwight to make sure Jim acts appropriately? Will Jim sneeze in Pam’s hair while trying to be sexy? Will she break his heart again?
Author's Response:
But... being evil is so fun!
Okay, how much to I LOVE your idea for Angela to send Dwight over? Answer: A LOT. Unfortunately, ch3 is already written so I can't put it in there... but, I may use a variation on your idea later on (I'll give you credit, of course).
You rock!
Date: November 10, 2007 12:33 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
this'll help the writers' strike ?!
:P anyway, this is fantastic ! don't
stop writing ! i need a new chapter ! (:
Author's Response: I'm still writing, dani! No worries. New chapter tonight, hopefully. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 10, 2007 07:13 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Oooooooooooooooooooh my lord. Please, please, please update this quickly! This ending, to part 2, just crossed my eyes with desperation!!! PLEASE! MORE!!
Author's Response: Oh no! I've caused eye problems! Lol, Stilla, thanks for the review-- I'm hoping to have ch3 up tonight!
9 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 05:17 am Title: From Bad to Worse
For the good of the strike, I'll leave this review. WOW! Ch 1 was totally hilarious from Angela's POV. Ch 2 had a very different tone, so much more serious. I'm not quite sure how Pam will pull herself out of this one but I'm certainly interested in seeing what you think. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks, fol! Chapter three is different in tone from the first two, I think. I hope it's a realistic resolution to the whole mess from Jim's bedroom in ch2!
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 08:34 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
So at first I was really disappointed that you started this new story, because I'm waiting for the next chapter of the Post-Benihana fic--but now I'm totally sucked in to this one, too. Can't wait for the next chapter of either one!
Author's Response: Oh jeeze. I have half of chapter 4 of my post-benihana fic totally done, and it's been that way for over a week! Now I feel guilty... must... finish... that chapter.... But I'm glad you like this one too, because ch3 should be up sometime tonight :)
Date: November 08, 2007 05:14 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
this is such a great fic, and with the writters strike and the last new Office ep airing next week, and me preparing for withdraws you MUST update asap!!!
Author's Response: No withdrawals yet Donnelly! Stay strong! (chapter 3 will hopefully be up tonight!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 04:29 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Boy, you just don't let up, do you? This chapter is even better than the original Dundies episode! Oh, wow... if only this really happened, right? We never would have had to put up with season 3.
Seriously, though, you've got a solid grasp of the characters, and the dialogue just flows effortlessly like a river. It's a treat to read this, and I'll definitely be following this from now on. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mose! I'm glad it all seems realistic to you :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 04:13 pm Title: A Bad Idea
Oh...WOW.
Just... let me take a moment and collect my thoughts.
Whew.
Okay, first of all, will you forgive me for not reading this story until now? Can this be a "sin free zone" like Angela's car? (Possibly the funniest line I've ever read--literally guffawing out loud over here!)
I can't even describe how great this was. You write Angela so well it's a little spooky. Now I have to go read the next chapter! This definitely deserved the ribbon it's proudly wearing!
Author's Response: Lol, Mose I will forgive you. Consider the review box a sin free zone. (glad you liked that part!) I was definitely spooking myself out with the Angela POV. So much fun though! Just keep out a thesaurus of nasty, uptight words and you're golden!
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 02:49 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
AH!! IT'S TRUE! It's SOOOO true!! He doesn't want that- HE WANTS MORE THAN THAT!! I'm excited for more :D
Author's Response: Yay! Ampay, that's exactly the line I almost added to the end of this, but I didn't want to copy Casino Night too much :)
Date: November 08, 2007 02:46 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
OMG. So good, need more. And it's exciting to see that good writers can still dip into old canon and make it new again.
(Also, “Oh my god!” she gasps between laughter. “You have crayons in your desk? Are you eight?” made me laugh out loud.)
Author's Response: thanks sophia! I wrote Jim's line about the crayons, and then I sort of laughed to myself and thought "oh god, I have to get rid of that line. what is he eight? Crayons?" and then I decided to keep and and give Pam my line :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 12:55 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
WOW! This chapter was intense! I need more! hehe
Author's Response: More coming soon! Don't worry :)
Date: November 08, 2007 08:32 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Hey...can I talk to you about something?
It's just...I'm in love with you.
That's how good this story is.
Author's Response:
What are you doing? What do you expect me to say to that?
Hee! Thanks so much nbyevu!
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 07:25 am Title: From Bad to Worse
i. iove. this fic. you are totally rocking the house on this one. i like it so much because it's just normal. them. the couch thing was spot on, trying to convince mark that it's not a big deal, pam's drunk reasoning - it all really works for me. lovely job. i can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks Emily! I always try really hard to keep things believable because my fics tend to be angstier than what we see on screen.