Date: June 29, 2008 05:20 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
I've recently been catching up with this story, and I'm so glad I did and so glad that you updated! Can't wait for more :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 02:14 pm Title: I've got a hunger...
Can't wait for more! One of my favorite stories!
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 01:55 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...
omg! this story is so - so - AMAZING! i never thought i would be able to bring myself to like a story like this, with jim and pam seperated with different lives, opposite of everything i wish them to be! but wow - this story - it opens my eyes to more and i absolutely love it!
great, great, GREAT work!!!
Date: June 29, 2008 11:21 am Title: I've got a hunger...
Oh, wow, that does suck. I don't know which of them I feel worse for. Glad to see you back, Shass!
Date: June 29, 2008 10:02 am Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
yeah, and update!
Date: June 29, 2008 09:49 am Title: I've got a hunger...
Glad to finally see an update. Hopefully things get resolved soon...I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: June 29, 2008 09:46 am Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
You just made my day by updating this story! A few of us on Northern Attack were patiently awaiting an update. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: June 29, 2008 09:26 am Title: I've got a hunger...
Shassafras, I'm so glad to see this story hasn't been forgotten! 'You don't deserve her'.... breaks my heart. Can't wait to see where you're taking us.
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 09:22 am Title: I've got a hunger...
I'm so glad you haven't totally abandoned this story. I check all the time for updates. It is one of my favorites. This chapter was great. So sad. I cannot wait to see where you take this story from here.
8 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2008 01:59 am Title: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
Really interesting story, Shassafrass. You should finish it!
Date: April 16, 2008 08:46 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
Oh, please update! I'm about to beg.........
Date: March 28, 2008 06:10 am Title: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
Hey... update please?
Thanks, luchy
10 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2008 10:57 pm Title: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
Oh please please please update this soon!!!
/shameless begging
Date: March 15, 2008 07:08 am Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
I generally don't read WIPs, I actually came across this by accident (TWOP). I would normally never read something so angsty, but this...GAH! It's just wonderful. I'm sorry to see there hasn't been an update in a month because I'm just amazed by the prose. I particularly enjoy the way you draw ALL of the characters as fully formed people. It's not just Jim & Pam and some other characters you threw in to draw the story out, it's Jim & Pam and Doug and Molly and they're real. So thank you and please continue.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:47 pm Title: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
Wait a minute! Is that all? PLEASE update asap! I can't stand it!!!
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:46 pm Title: When the Wind Blows the Water White and Black...
God, this is a really intense moment. It's perfect.
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Combing the White Hair of the Waves Blown Back...
How can any of them possible stand this??? At least Jim and Pam aren't sneaking around, though.
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:43 pm Title: ...Riding Seaward on the Waves...
Nice glimpse into Doug...I loved the battle imagery.
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:42 pm Title: I Have Seen Them...
You are killing me with suspense, but I am so glad you're not rushing this.
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:41 pm Title: I Do Not Think That They Will Sing to Me...
They really do have an uncanny connection, don't they?
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:40 pm Title: ...Each to Each...
Wow, that was painful. Poor Pam. Your writing is just so wonderful, and your characters are so sharp. I am very impressed.
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:38 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...
I am so impressed at how you maintain the complexity of their relationship through all this. This isn't black and white, and you can love more than one person at a time. The question is what to do about it...
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:36 pm Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...
This is sad, and unhealthy...but also emphasizes the depth of their love. It's hard to be an honorable person sometimes...
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:34 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
Wow...so was this really an accident? If I were Molly, I'd want to check out Pam anonymously, too...
--Strider
Date: March 13, 2008 10:31 pm Title: That will send us crashing...
Excellent angst. Heartbreaking. I love Jim's POV.
--Strider