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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 01:30 pm Title: I Have Seen Them...

I have to stop myself from biting off all my nails.  Is that weird????  (don't answer)  I'm dying here, Shass.  This is soooo good.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2008 06:26 am Title: I Do Not Think That They Will Sing to Me...

F*ck.  I'm drained.  Don't leave me hanging, Shass.  This is too good.  I really can't even imagine where you're headed. 

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 10:16 pm Title: I Do Not Think That They Will Sing to Me...

Ok, so I just caught up with this story, managing (stupidly) to overlook it for the first 12 chapters.  I have to say, I have no clue where you are going with this -- but it is some of the most powerful writing I've read in awhile.  Every chapter just hits me square in the gut.  Though I'm figuring the happy ending I'm accustomed to, won't happen...I'm still looking forward to what you have in store.  Great work

Reviewer: notatoy Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:06 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

He loves her. He does.
Just not with all of his heart.

That line slayed me!  This is a wonderful creation you have here, I'm excited to see how each of them goes on.

 

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...

I was just thinking about this story the other day and I'm so glad to see it back. The feeling, emotion and tension you've managed to weave are so freaking real. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for this.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:49 pm Title: I Do Not Think That They Will Sing to Me...

*dies*

So good, Shassafrass. I'm becoming a broken record, but I almost don't even care anymore. The tension is palpable, and I think I know what kind of semi-happy ending you're sneaking up on (I'm thinking the end of Cast Away, if that's a clue), but right or wrong, I know you won't disappoint. I'll be checking for more updates; it's been a treat to get so many new chapters in one day! -CH

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:39 pm Title: ...Each to Each...

"What kills me is…” His voice breaks, just a little. “…that I’m the guy you settled for.”

Poor Doug. For his sake, and Mollie's, I hope their world is able to right itself. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:24 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

"Please say something to me because every second that you don’t just says that I’m losing you and I can’t lose you.”

This was so heartbreakingly sad. Poor, poor Molly. 

Reviewer: PrettyBlueDress Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:16 pm Title: ...Each to Each...

This is, by far, one of the most amazing things I have ever read. It's gut-wrenching and beautiful at the same time. Thank you so much for writing this.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 06:16 pm Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

So glad to see you updated. It's a difficult story to read, by that I mean, difficult to the heart, but when a new chapter is up I pounce on it as I don't want to miss a thing. Awesome job.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 05:45 pm Title: ...Each to Each...

Keep 'em coming, Shass. I'm here for the ride, just waiting for more... --CH

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 04:57 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

This story...Shassafrass...it's just killing me.  Please, please don't wait so long to update next time.  It's gorgeous, so full of emotion.  It's like you've taken these characters and perfectly transported them forward in time.  I love how the story is being revealed just a tiny bit at a time and my heart aches for all of them, but especially Molly.  And that is some kind storytelling - to make the reader care as much, if not more, about someone you just made up, than Jim and Pam themselves.  Okay, I'm a little into the wine here, so I can't be as specific as I'd like to be, so I'll just say thank you so much for updating.

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 04:45 pm Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

Clicked 'next' then 'previous' because I can't let a single chapter of this story go by without saying how great it is.  I was worried this was going to be forgotten, but I can't tell you how over the moon I am to see an update.  There is a mood hanging over this story that you are so adept at creating and I can't get enough of it.  Okay?  Okay.  Clicking 'next' now.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 04:15 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

It's extremely rare that I actually feel edgy reading a fanfic. And this story - this last chapter in particular - has me all kinds of antsy. I like that their respective mates aren't simply fodder, but sympathetic characters (especially Molly,) not so easily jettisoned. And how that thing between them just won't die. Really riveting.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 04:09 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

Shassafrass--I will go on a hunger strike between new chapters of this story (that's a lie, but I might give up something else important, like exercise or something). You absolutely KILL me with every chapter, and I love you for it. I cannot wait to see what happens next; some sick, twisted part of me wants them to dump their all-too-innocent spouses so they can finally be happy with each other. I especially love this: "...Just not with all of his heart." That so perfectly sums up Jim's feelings for all the non-Pams we've seen him with on the show, and you've written the turmoil so beautifully.

Guh. I'm dead, Shassafrass. DEAD! And lovin' every minute. More, more, more (and perhaps some Siren too? I'm greedy today)!! --CH

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 03:26 pm Title: I Have Heard the Mermaids Singing ...

Wow, great, great chapter! I totally feel for both of them - great job!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 02:11 pm Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

I got so excited when I saw that this was updated! And then said "wow" after reading this latest chapter. Did not expect that about Pam. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Jimpong Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 01:29 pm Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

Awesome.  I sent you a myspace btw!

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 11:16 am Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

I really like the Jim/Pam married to other people but still in love with each other kind of fic and you have perfected it with this story! I just re-read all of it and you need to update soon!

Reviewer: Mirielle Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 10:48 am Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

I love that this story so eloquently expresses the deep emotions running through the connection between Jim and Pam... it's like an addiction between them, which pulls them together no matter how harmful it may be.

Love love love that you updated! Keep the greatness coming!

M

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 09:25 am Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

Absolutely thrilled to have you back, Shass!  I love this story and have been thinking of it.  So nice to see an update.  Needless to say, excellent job.

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:29 am Title: ...Of a Cold, Barren Coast...

Shassafrass--I'm SO happy to see this story again! I love the tension and flow of the words, and I'm already waiting for the next few chapters. Part of me is still hoping Larissa is Jim's kid (even if it's impossible within the timeline of the story!), but I simply cannot wait to see where this goes next!! --Best, CH

Reviewer: jimsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2008 05:39 pm Title: Into the Rocks...

LOVE this story, can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 06:30 am Title: Into the Rocks...

ACK!!!!!!! You can't leave me hangin' like that! I may need a defibrilator! LOL

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 09:47 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...

Keep updating! I love that they met in the park ... guh. Can't wait. This story is so intriguing. 

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