You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans
Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2009 11:28 am Title: First Timer

As a Black Friday shopper: THIS IS AWESOME!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2008 08:34 am Title: Revenge

Quite an undertaking!  Thanks for finishing : )

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 06:48 am Title: Chapter 6

aww soo cute...can't wait for more???

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 09:37 am Title: Chapter 6

Yay! I was so excited to see another chapter of this appear!
Nice job as usual...I have to admit, the thought of dealing with Michael Scott at 7am after 3 hours of shopping is enough to make me cringe...poor Jim!
Also, I am in full support of writing fic while in class...so hurray for lecture classes if that means more updates!! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

 "But as the first customer got her monkey stuffed..."  TWSS!

This is another ritual I've never taken part in, and I loved Jim's trip to Build a Bear, or Build a pink cat as the case may be. The description of the heart ceremony was priceless!  How Pam could send him there without being there to witness that cuteness is beyond me.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 06:46 pm Title: Attack of the Gadgets

Wow, friends of mine also hit Target on BF and this was just like she described it!  Scary! And how cute of Jim to think they were going home....

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28, 2007 06:06 am Title: An Encounter With the Nard-dog

“Next year” he said to himself “we’re buying everything online.”

the greatest line ever!!!!!

Reviewer: katoepotatoe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2007 11:24 am Title: An Encounter With the Nard-dog

“...and then I could record myself singing a romantic ballad. How does that sound?”

haha this was a really great chapter. Andy is one of my favorite characters-- glad you wove him in.

Keep going-- I'm anxious to hear the rest! Great job so far :)

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

so fun! love this story!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 10:49 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

is it sad that i LOVE build-a-bear and honestly wouldn't mind working there? though that's mostly because I'd love to make guys like Jim who get their butts dragged in there by their girlfriends make wishes on little pink hearts and do the hokey pokey to make sure they come true. ^_^

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 08:26 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

HAHAHA! jIM AT BUILD-A-BEAR!!! LOL seriously? that might be one fo the funniest things i've ever imagined... cuz he's so tall and awkward. oh... you described this perfectly! great job. 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

Why do I suspect Jim is getting all these gifts wrong? Anyways, another fun chapter!

Reviewer: JAMtastic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 06:09 pm Title: Where Best Gifts Are Made

This is so dead-on!  I've been there with my kids and I can just see Jim going there with a sense of doom.  I'm loving this story...what he won't do for Pam.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 04:58 pm Title: First Timer

Now, that is love!  I've always wanted to go Black Friday shopping but I'm too lazy to wake up that early. I envy those who do!  Cute premise.

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2007 09:49 pm Title: The Black Friday Helper

I can just imagine the looks on Jim and Darryl's faces during this chapter...so funny. Your foreshadowing at the end does not make me feel like Jim is going to have an easy go at the rest of that list...can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 04:20 pm Title: The Black Friday Helper

Keep it coming! Love it!!!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 12:44 pm Title: The Black Friday Helper

I just love this story. Such a nice combination of emotion and silliness. Parfait!

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 11:34 am Title: The Black Friday Helper

Oh Kelly. I love Jim's sympathy for Darryl at the end of this chapter. This is just such a funny, yet true series of black Friday type events. I love it so far!

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Attack of the Gadgets

This is funny.  I'd never done the Black Friday thing until this year - you nailed it.  Can't wait to read the next bit.

Reviewer: Grandmutter Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2007 06:32 am Title: Attack of the Gadgets

This is hilarious! I like how you incorporate our favorite couple into a story centering around Black Friday. I hope that there will be character development brought about by their experience... maybe like some lessons learned or a revealing conversation...

And I'm a Black Friday virgin. Is it really like that?! Woa!

Reviewer: shootingstars Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2007 09:13 pm Title: Attack of the Gadgets

This is hilarious. I love the electronics attack and poor Jim's cluelessness about the camera. So typical of him. And Pam's just wandering around homewares...
Love it!

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2007 08:09 pm Title: Attack of the Gadgets

yay! this is fabulously fun. Although the ideaof going back to bed at 6 and sleeping til 12 sounds deeelisshhh to me. yay for Black Friday!!!

Reviewer: skeber Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 29, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Attack of the Gadgets

Love it!! Keep it coming!!!!!!

Reviewer: shootingstars Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 08:35 pm Title: First Timer

*sigh* this is fantastic. It brought such a big smile to my face. Can't wait to see Jim attack electronics...

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28, 2007 05:18 pm Title: First Timer

I'm cracking up already...and I'm sure the fiasco hasn't even started. Great job and I feel for Jim, since this year I was a "first timer" too.

You must login (register) to review or leave jellybeans