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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

this makes me sad. even so i like it better than what actually happened. it makes them both less mean/less victims and such.

Author's Response: I'm an equal opportunity fic writer :) I would have definately have preferred this, because at least this way they could have parted ways and maybe been friends later? But thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nice. I wasn't a huge Karen fan, but I always thought it was unfair that she got caught in the middle of someone else's love story.

Author's Response:

I think S3 was definately unfair to her, so I do have some sympathy for her. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1

That was gorgeous!  I love the honor in letting her break it off, despite his intentions to finally do it.  Lovely detail about her touch being light instead of needy.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think that if they had been in the same place emotionally, Jim would have let her break up with him, considering this game of monkey in the middle they were playing with her. Thanks!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04, 2007 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice.  A little preemptive strike by Karen.


Author's Response: Thanks! I think she deserves to get a few licks in ;)

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2007 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This is short, but it really packs a punch. I love this bittersweet look that how their relationship might have ended. I think it paints them both in a fairly sympathetic light. Excellent!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I was trying to figure out some way in which neither of them had to be the bad guy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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