Date: December 17, 2007 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 9: The Confetti Hearts and Fading Colors
bravo :) this whole story was amazing
10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2007 08:20 am Title: Chapter 9: The Confetti Hearts and Fading Colors
aw,this was a perfect ending! so sweet! i love the colour descriptions you give at the end [i] She couldn’t remember a time when red was that vibrant, that passionate or alluring. [/i] very cool! well done on the entire story!
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2007 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Act 1 Scene 5
aw, cute chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: December 09, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.
this was so adorable and i thought it was just going to be over after she said:
“No you know what you are?” she asked, making her way closer to the sink.
“An ass…”
but of course it was not and this is amzing and very like them
Date: December 09, 2007 10:23 am Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.
Excellent! Please continue the story!
Date: December 09, 2007 12:12 am Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.
WHAT?!?!?! that was evil!!! you can't stop there!! I demand(in my best dwight voice) that you get back here this instant!!! ......ok please come back and write some more!!!
Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: :D why thank you and of course more is to come!!!!!!!!!! xoxo
Date: December 08, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.
I've enjoyed this story a lot. I think it's a very plausible alternate path from Casino night; you have the whole thing laying out very realistically.
Date: December 08, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.
this is PERFECT !
i love it (:
Author's Response: thank you!!!! <3333
Date: December 08, 2007 09:19 am Title: Chapter 3: The Saying and It's Meaning
this is amazing, you are amazing !
but please, is there any light at the end
of this angst-filled tunnel ? :P
Author's Response: yes there is :D don't worry JAM will prevail<333
Date: December 07, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Casino Night.
Very interesting and an odd twist to see what they would have acted like if they had to be around each other.
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 2: The Hangovers
Great story, interesting twist to Casino Night cliffhanger. =)
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