10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
This was a lovely way to spend part of my afternoon. Thanks so much for writing it.
Date: December 06, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
wow... that was amazing...isn't it funny how in the blink of an eye you KNOW what could happen, so you chose differently... good job.
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 12:03 pm Title: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
This has been my favorite poem for as long as i can remember but i never applied it to jim and his decision between karen and pam! this was amazing!
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 12:01 pm Title: And that has made all the difference.
Gorgeous.
9 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 11:22 am Title: Had worn them really about the same
This is really good. Makes me a bit heartsick though - painful to read, but very well done.
Date: December 06, 2007 11:13 am Title: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
Oh wow I just discovered this story and I absolutely adore it. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Date: December 06, 2007 10:07 am Title: Had worn them really about the same
Ooh, this is good. I always like thinking about how things could have been if one character had made one different choice. Looking forward to seeing how everything turns out!
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2007 09:56 am Title: Had worn them really about the same
Wow. This is just amazing. I just read these 10 chapters and i just am blown away at how good this is.
You combined one of my favourite poems with the character of Jim and it is great. It really applies to him.
Can't wait for more.
Date: December 06, 2007 09:43 am Title: Two roads diverged in a yellow wood
Wow. I just read all 10 chapters at once and you're killing me, but in the good way. I wish he would have opened his eyes and realized what he was doing...please update soon!
Date: December 06, 2007 08:06 am Title: Then took the other, as just as fair
This is so great! And very realistic--it could have happened this way.
Date: December 06, 2007 07:21 am Title: And be one traveler, long I stood
I'm very interested to see where you take this story!