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Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

jim is a douchebag! i'm very upset at him! thanks for the added clarification...it makes it ten times clearer now!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

ah yes, the explaination helps a lot. still heartbreaking.


Author's Response: terrific! i'm glad the explanation helped :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

aww. its sad. i am not totally clear (jim and pam breaking up?) but its sad    

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1

I don't understand.  It's "in their apartment" so it's not Jim and Karen. 

Is it supposed to be Jim and Pam in the future, living together and/or married?  And Jim's not happy and is breaking up with Pam?

I think it would be better if this were clearer. 



Author's Response: thanks for the feedback! i've added an explanation in the story's end-notes to make the idea clear.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

55 words of heartbreaking sadness.



Author's Response: thanks for commenting, and that's exactly the feeling i was hoping to convey

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa. Ouch!


Author's Response: Yup. Exactly. ;)

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