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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2020 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1

You know, on the one hand I am very much on board with the idea that everything needed to happen the way it did for them to work out long run.

On the other hand, these STILL break my heart.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fascinating.  Were the first four all the same alternate universe then?  I was a little confused by the abrupt switch to "now" in the final vingnette.  Still, I really enjoyed this a lot.  Fun to play with.

Author's Response: Thanks! No, I didn't mean for them to be in the same AU. Basically the first one is if Jim had made a move on that first "date", the second one is if Pam had broken up with Roy ahead of time, three is if she'd reciprocated on Casino Night, the fourth if Jim and Karen had broken up before they did and the last one is as it is now. Sorry for the confusion, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2007 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sometimes there can't be any shortcuts. Lovely.

Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

The one where Jim's girlfriend got pregnant killed me. Really.  But the last one revived me to read another day.

Author's Response:

Ah the electroshock paddles of fluff. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Ow.  Make S3 all necessary and stuff, why don't you?  And I absolutely think Pam & Jim should elope.  It would be adorable.

Author's Response: Sorry, it had to be done. ;) Pam and Jim should definitely elope. Wouldn't that be a great season finale? "Yeah, they've actually been married since, like, February." Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 08:54 am Title: Chapter 1

yikes. this hurts to read. they are all really good, but I feel cheated that there are four that make me feel like I was punched in the face while I was sleeping, and only one that makes me all warm and fuzzy inside.

 but I mean that in a good way :)



Author's Response: Well as long as it's in a good way. :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 9 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1

oh dear - how lovely. i have to confess liking their doomed efforts best. there's something bittersweet and wistful about them - v. irresistable. wonderful job.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was actually kinda fun to explore the dark, angsty road with these two, simply because I knew I could bring them right back to the present unscathed.

Reviewer: Alie_Woos Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1

"Pam ends up proposing to Jim while they’re both half asleep watching an old rerun of The Simpsons" aww, that's so.. weird but sweet.. its perfect :) 

Author's Response:

Thanks! I think those two have worked so long at DM that weird has become second nature to them. :)

Reviewer: invis Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Okay, first of all: #3? YES. THANK YOU! That is exactly why it shouldn't have happened that way. 

I love all the scenarios, and the one where they did get together was perfect. Pam proposing to Jim is fabulous. Fabulous, I say!

Really excellent work with this. I loved it. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought about it for a long time and, you know? Pam without the "fancy new" tacked on the the front would just be a disaster.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 15, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1

You know that principle in quantum physics that says for every action in this world, all the possible other outcomes of that action play out in other worlds in parallel dimensions? That's what this story felt like: peering through some sort of interdimensional window into what might have happened; what could have been (as your title so aptly says). 

You weren't kidding about those first four times. Oy. They were indeed painful to read, but each completely plausible in their own way. Perhaps that's what made them so difficult to read: knowing that Jim and Pam are always one bad decision away from chaos. Okay, so that may not be the message you intended me to take away from this, 'cause it's sort of a bleak way of looking at things. But trust me, I'm not depressed by this story at all. That last vignette made up for everything. And if anything, the previous four just made the last one all that sweeter. :)

Well done! 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Jim and Pam are always one bad decision away from chaos. LOL, I guess that is true in its own way. I think that their relationship is like the creation of life on earth: everything had to be just so for it to work out at all. Which may be a bit too over dramatic for a fictional couple, but you get my point.

You know, I love quantum physics. No seriously, I have this book that I can't read for too long because it'll give me a headache, but principles like that are what make me continue reading.

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