1 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2020 10:14 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
There's something about these two that just WORKS with Christmas episodes - I love this.
1 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2018 04:26 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
I love this as it is, but kind of wish it were a whole AU and not just a one shot. Greedy, I know, but it's really lovely.
Date: December 17, 2007 06:51 am Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
This was really intense and so delightful to read! I really felt the emotion that was there. This was so great!
Date: December 16, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
This is excellent. I read it and I was like "who wrote this!! I have to read more of your stuff!" And then I realized it was you... and I'm pretty sure I've already read everything you have written on MTT.
Not to be a creeper or anything. But yes, loved it, loved the circularity of it, I love Jim's smile too [/creeper].
Date: December 16, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
that's all youre going to let us have ? wow, what a cliffhanger. :P but this is amazing, great job on it !
Date: December 16, 2007 08:57 am Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
Ohhh. So happy.
7 [Report This]Date: December 16, 2007 07:50 am Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
this is so f---ing CUTE! a lot of little touches here are great - loosening his tie, her squeezing his hand - it all fits together and it's lovely.
Date: December 15, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
Wow! Isn't that nice! That's some punch. If only it were spiked a bit more often, maybe they would have figured things out a long time before. :)
I love the last two lines especially.
Date: December 15, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
hah, maybe that voice drank some spiked punch too.
I can see that smile. Guh. Nicely done.
8 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2007 08:01 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
Yum! So sweet and romantic. Any chance that watching B.C. a third time will lead to Spiked Punch and Second Moves?
10 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
Why oh why did this not happen on the show? Think of the agita we could have been spared!
“Yeah, I’d share with you. I’d share anything with you.”
Yup, there it is. You're always so good at writing these intense little moments (that aren't really simple at all,) where the emotions just sing. Loved this much.
Date: December 15, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Spiked Punch and First Moves
WOW- you cant stop now!!!!!