Reviews For Blue
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Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love your style, and it's so very Jim! It's extremely well-written!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. I especially loved the last line - "True blue always returns for the second wave."

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

This piece reads like a poem. Beautiful!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped it would.

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

This piece reads like a poem. Beautiful!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 10:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Never thought of blue that way. I have a whole new view of it now. :)

Author's Response:

As long as it doesn't confuse the color spectrum for you, I'm glad :)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1

"He waits for her to hear the difference."

Fantastic.



Author's Response:

Somehow, you always manage to comment on the lines I hope people would notice. Thanks so much for that :)

Reviewer: sicokitty Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 07:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I remember this one! Again, very nice.  Nice use of imagery.


Author's Response: Thanks! Hope that was too much blue for you ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 04:43 am Title: Chapter 1

The wordplay is skillfully done, here, and very evocative. By the end, it threatens to overwhelm the emotional content a little bit, but for your first one ever? This was an amazing start.

Author's Response:

If I recall correctly, this piece wasn't always well-received - I think in part because it's rather confusing. It's quite interesting for me, however, to revisit, because it quite neatly sums up how I felt about Jam in those early moments not long after the finale. I've since sobered up (I think).

Thanks for the review :)

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