Date: May 17, 2011 12:29 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I think the ending of the chapter was great. And I gotta say, I just read all 11 chapters straight through and it makes me nervous everytime Pam starts doubting her relationship with Jim. Luckily, you never let that mood last long and it never ruins the whole trip or anything. She does love jim. And she'd told hom. And they're having a lot of incredible sex; even though they both know they aren't an official couple yet - 'cause Pam deserves a little grief and who am I time.
Can't wait for chapter 12~
Date: May 10, 2008 01:42 am Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
Are you still going with this one? I really hope you are! You've just provided me with a lovely hour or so of escapism. At least this chapter didn't end in a cliffhanger, but still - last chapters would be good!
Date: February 26, 2008 04:35 pm Title: Hotel Rooms and Beaches
I love the way that they're talking but also not talking, and it doesn't matter that they're not talking about the stuff they're not talking about because they're mature enough to understand and move past it without hashing it out to death... if that makes sense? ;)
Also, I adored and giggled at the somewhat meta reference to the supply closet idea, being that at this point it's become a classic and sort of cliché fanfic technique (not intending offense to any writers who have used the supply closet - it's cliché but has also been done very well).