Date: December 27, 2007 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Huh? and then Oh crap. That was perfect. Very sweet.
Date: December 27, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is PERFECT ! great job ! :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I love you" ... "Huh?" ... "Oh Crap"
That was perfect! Sweet, and funny, and just perfect! I completely adored this story!
Date: December 27, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is sweet without being saccharine; wonderful job :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww, so sweet!!
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, so good.
Date: December 27, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fabulous story! I really loved it, especially how well you capture's Pam's thought process with such realism. How cute were they when she finally said it to him?! Loved it!
8 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I didn't get it," he said. "But I got something better."
Such a cute line - such a sweet story!
Date: December 27, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great story. I can totally see Pam "practicing" the words to herself and I agree that Jim is probably always trying to be better than Roy. And that when she finally said it, it wasn't a big romantic gesture at all, but more a simple, warm, PB and J moment, which somehow seems right for them.
Date: December 27, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
mmm... this is a delicious little morsel, like a crunchy biscotti you can dip in hot cocoa. Love how it just spills out of Pam's mouth.
Date: December 27, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was really nice. I loved the end lines, just wonderful :)
10 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
i loved THIS! YAY!