Date: January 09, 2008 08:26 am Title: whispers in the dark
Yeah for this. I love how well you wrote this scene despite the few words. Jim smiling against his pillow speaks volumes. Her whispering like a child. His "there, much better." All of it was really nice. Loved it.
I'm happy you liked it BlueBustyGal! I wasn't sure how much I liked it since it was so short but I think it kind of packs a punch with it's few words (at least I like to think so) I'm thrilled that you liked those parts too because I had some favorite lines in this too :) Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: January 08, 2008 11:11 pm Title: whispers in the dark
So sweet. I can't sleep either (its 2am and I have to be up at 6:30 to go to work) so I decided to check out MTT. This is a great behind the scenes for Pam's look the next morning when the camera sees the beds are pushed together.
Author's Response: Ooh I hate not being able to sleep when I really need to! Sorry you couldn't sleep but at least I could keep you entertained with my little story! Thanks for the comments and glad you liked it, kaystar!
Date: January 08, 2008 04:44 am Title: whispers in the dark
hehe I loved it. again. YAY! well done buddy.
Yay! I'm hapy you liked it (again)! I'm working on your story now so expect something by the end of hte day!
again thanks for the help and encouragment, Shariep! You rock my socks :)
Date: January 07, 2008 08:32 pm Title: whispers in the dark
"Just close your eyes and count the beets."
Still love that line :). You already know that I love this, but I must tell you again that it is ADORABLE!!! I love that you were able to say so much in so few lines/words. I'm such a wordy writer that I admire the skills you have in doing that :).
Again, awesome job, my dear! Hopefully I shall be talking to you soon because I am working on another chapter to send to you :).
Author's Response: Hee, you know, two other girls told me that was their fave line too! So I knew I had to leave it in there then :) So thrilled you thought it was adorable and yay for new chapters from you!! *writhes hands in anticipation* Cannot wait!!
Date: January 07, 2008 07:14 pm Title: whispers in the dark
Hanson nerd over here read strictly on title...hehe
very cute lil drabble, I admire so much when people can convey so much in so few words. Awesome job :)
Yay for fellow Hanson nerds! Pretty sure i'm obessed with The Walk and the acoustic version of
Middle of Nowhere. Um. Yeah :) I knew there had to be fellow Hanson fans somewhere!! haha
Glad you enjoyed my short little story and felt the emotional aspect too. Thanks for the review!
Date: January 07, 2008 06:39 pm Title: whispers in the dark
Schrute Farms fluff! Yay. Not to worry, Dwight wouldn't hear them with all the moaning he was doing anyway.
heh True, very true. Dwight might not have heard them. But still. :)
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review!