Date: November 02, 2017 08:36 am Title: Should have known better
I think this fic does a great job with the characters, and it is a deep shame it isn't finished. Thanks for what did get done, though.
Date: April 08, 2010 07:44 pm Title: and I hate the way I'm wearing all these lies
Well I see (from previous reviews) that this fic is probably going to remain unfinished, but I just had to review this chapter.. you've captured Jim and Pam pretty much perfectly and it makes my heart break. *sigh*
Date: October 12, 2009 08:58 am Title: Secrets told in the pictures on your skin
This is a good story. It sucks to have read it all and its not finished & probably never will be.
Date: April 16, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Secrets told in the pictures on your skin
Update???? Puhhhleeeze?!
Date: March 10, 2008 02:37 pm Title: Should have known better
pleeeease update!!
Date: March 01, 2008 05:55 pm Title: Should have known better
Please finish!
Date: March 01, 2008 08:30 am Title: Is she everything you wanted her to be?
Karen shook her head. “I used to hear those stories and tell people that they couldn’t pay me to work here. And now look at me.” She smiled over at him, her eyes shining.
I think people would have to pay her regardless .. lol. But the story's great .. really diggin' it.
Date: February 29, 2008 09:40 am Title: Should have known better
aww...so sad at the end, but i undersand jim...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 29, 2008 01:11 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
I'm really enjoying your series. I like how real Pam is, and how you are handling the whole seperation from Roy. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 28, 2008 06:07 pm Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Ooh, Pam's revenge was good. ;) And I love that the difference in Pam's relationship status has caused them to interact in such a way that Karen's picking up on their vibe so much sooner than she did on the show. It gives me hope that they'll find it in them to be completely honest about their feelings a lot sooner too.
Date: February 28, 2008 06:03 pm Title: So it's one more night I cover up with you
Ahhh, I love the little awkward ring/Christmas present misunderstanding. And they managed to come back from it well, too! And I love the little flashbacks to the moments from Andy's list.
Date: February 28, 2008 11:31 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
so good...i am glad that karen noticed, but i don't want her in the picture (i want me some jam)...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 09:00 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Love. This. Story. I thought you did a fine job with the two recent chapters. You really wove the story well. Everything is just so believable.
9 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 08:30 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
Petty--Hoorah for a new chapter from you! I was just about to settle in and start studying for an exam, but I saw the update and decided Aristotle could wait. What a wonderful installment! I love the tension you've been building with each new chapter, but I'm starting to wonder now how you're going to wrap this up when the time comes. It's interesting that Jim is still with Karen even though gooey-fun pre-CN Jam flirtations are back in full swing. You've got me on the edge of my seat here, and I was pulled in from the first few words of the chapter. I will say, nay, declare, that I bristled when Karen tried on a southern accent; as a Tennesseean, I almost felt my stomach turn when I imagined her using our drawl, and then to add insult to injury, you made her love "Gone with the Wind!" That's my all time favorite movie, but I tell you what, Petty, thinking Karen loved it almost ruined the 21 years I've loved it. Haha--But no worries, because before I could register my upset you start adding on the angst and drama with that wonderful break room scene. I love the way you explored three of the corners to the love-parallelogram you've established in this story, and I continue to be on the edge of my seat waiting for more. Keep it up, my friend! --CH
Date: February 28, 2008 08:15 am Title: And I hate myself for what I didn't do
I, for one, love dialouge so THANK YOU! very good touche' for Pam as well.
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 03:31 pm Title: So it's one more night I cover up with you
Can I just say how much I love it when fanfic writers write "back stories"? I love, love, LOVE it! And you did a BRILLIANT job writing the back stories for the advice Jim gave Andy on how to impress Pam in The Convict. Great job weaving TC and ABC into your story. This is a fun fic to read and I'm looking forward to more.
8 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 03:29 pm Title: So it's one more night I cover up with you
Love the background on the tidbits that Jim fed to Andy. Good story you have going here!
10 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 03:13 pm Title: So it's one more night I cover up with you
Oh, Petty, I'm so glad to see an update on this one! I just took a wicked exam, and this was the perfect treat with which to unwind. The fumbled awkwardness of "the Christmas gift" was wonderfully executed; you're doing great work here! --CH
Date: February 24, 2008 07:35 am Title: I bet she never breaks your heart like me
Ooh, good talk! I love how even though Pam went through with the wedding, which would have been very backwards and unhealthy of her, the fact that she did means she's coming into her own, with honesty and boldness and wanting to change her life and let Jim know, much sooner than she did in canon.
Date: February 24, 2008 07:20 am Title: When you walk away
first of all - i am loving this!! such an interesting take - and v. angsty. can't wait to continue reading.
however, i'd be remiss if i didn't mention that 'hermaphrodite' is a problematic term. i know it was a joke, and not meant to be offensive, but it's a complicated, loaded word. for more info: http://www.glaad.org/media/guide/transfocus.php
thanks for writing - hope you don't mind my comment.
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2008 06:44 pm Title: I bet she never breaks your heart like me
Love this story. PLEASE keep this going!
Date: February 23, 2008 06:41 am Title: I bet she never breaks your heart like me
amazing...love how pam told him, he needs time now to sort out his life...can't wait for more!!
Date: February 22, 2008 11:49 pm Title: I bet she never breaks your heart like me
I love this story. I lack original thoughts at 3 AM, but know again and again how much I'm enjoying this. Wonderful work! --CH
Date: February 22, 2008 10:02 pm Title: Is she everything you wanted her to be?
Wow...I really love this story. Just started reading it today and I'm hooked. Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2008 06:51 pm Title: Is she everything you wanted her to be?
oh so good! more soon please!