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Reviewer: Pamalama Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2008 01:58 pm Title: From Black to Tan??

" Jim cleared his throat, trying to keep their banter up and certain parts down."

Hahaha yessss :) So good!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 07:28 pm Title: From Black to Tan??

"Jim cleared his throat, trying to keep their banter up and certain parts down."

This was so funny!  Great backstory for the changing of the pants!

PS  Unless Jim now speaks like Tony Soprano, you might want to correct the two words I highlighted in this sentence:  Jim squirmed at the feel of the heat from her hand seeping trough his close into his skin.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 05:13 pm Title: From Black to Tan??

Very sexy.  Love it!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2008 04:59 pm Title: From Black to Tan??

I had never noticed that lovely error..and I adore your explanation... I'm sure Pam had a part in helping him change his pants too...you did say he left them in the car right? ;)

great job 

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