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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love Oscar - and I love that you wrote a story featuring him.  This was great!

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Jim still wearing his newsboy cap, a “punishment” devised by Pam for his failure to read any of Angela’s Ashes"
best. ["appropriate"] punishment. ever.

but I did enjoy reading this... especially seeing the JAM-ness from a different perspective. :) yay!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Oscar as matchmaker- how sweet! I hope we see more of him when (if) Season 4 resumes. I like this!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Bara, you make ME happy!  Loved this--Oscar's intuitiveness, the interactions between Oscar and Toby, Toby's bitterness and eventual surprise.  I love the idea that Jim had good reasons for not reading the book, rather than just looking like a slacker.  And they finally get to sign the love contract!  Yay! GREAT job.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that was fun.  The Toby characterization in S4 has been troubling, and has just made me not want to write Toby at all.  What I like most here, though, is your Oscar.  He's sort of an unsung, really decent solid guy, and I really appreciate your take on him here. 

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2008 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely! Great job of Oscar to call out Toby! Loved Oscar and Jim's bonding too :)

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