Reviews For Open Waters
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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Something Else

I like that this chapter was from her perspective - nice to see a new character.  But what is wrong with her that she wouldn't want to go on a hot date with Jim?  ;-)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 07:00 pm Title: Something Else

It's going along great, PamPongChamp.  I'm around to beta, though, if you want.  I'll email you or PM you, in case you've lost my email. :)  (I wouldn't call it "desperate need for a beta, though!)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 06:45 am Title: Something Else

Cute!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 06:36 am Title: Something Else

You've created an intriguing character!  Nice update.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 12:37 am Title: Something Else

beta-schmeta...this is interesting :)  I mean...betas are great! use them always! haha

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 08:50 am Title: "Pretty hot huh?

What a great idea!  I'll be watching for more! ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 05:59 pm Title: "Pretty hot huh?

“Steer clear, Big Tuna.  Head for open waters.”

I've always loved that line!  I can't wait to see what she did to Andy - and what she does to Jim!

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 12:10 pm Title: "Pretty hot huh?

Oh wow, this is a cool story. I'm excited for more!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 09:03 am Title: "Pretty hot huh?

Intriguing beginning!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2008 07:06 am Title: "Pretty hot huh?

I'm hooked ; )  Very intriguing.  More!

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