Reviews For Letting loose
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Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2008 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey hope you haven't forgotten about this fic. I Really like it and hope you update :)

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter 3

Aacckkk! Please keep posting. I am going to need more chapters and more resolution and more JAM. Chris...actually I dated a guy named Chris who was quite nice. But he's not Jim!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Haha, no, Chris is no Jim. *sigh* Sorry for the delay in posting, I've got two stories going right now, and they're fighting for both space in my head and time to write them. I'll try to get the next chapter up soon though! Thanks so much for your support (even though I'm not rabid...sorry couldn't help myself) ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2008 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

"He silently wondered why he had ever thought he wanted to be without her."
 

This chapter was beautifully written and so well thought out, but it made me sad that Jim was pushing Pam out of his heart and letting Karen settle in.

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the support kaystar! Thank you for the lovely compliments. You brightened my day! And don't worry too much about Karen settling in...I need my JAM too much for that to last long! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2008 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved it - no rocks from me! I like that Pam went back in and was able to clear the air with Chris. Jim can't have it both ways, and I think Chris is just the person to show him that.  I'm glad you decided to continue!  Now, please update soon! 

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it kaystar! I have to admit I was a little nervous posting this...I know many people hate the idea of Jim or Pam being happy without the other, but it just seemed so right. Thanks for reading and reviewing! More to come soon!!

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

love it ! (: more pleaseeeee !

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me on this one! I'm glad you've liked it so far. More to come soon! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2

I am so glad that you decided to keep going..I loved the first chapter and this one was even better. I look forward to the next!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks hues8! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying this so far. It's been really fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2

Like it!  Go, Pam!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing NanReg! I'm glad you like it so far! More to come soon!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 06:01 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm glad you continued and can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it gotkona. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it! More to come soon!

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 05:43 am Title: Chapter 2

I want to see what happens next! Poor JAM!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing skeber...more to come soon! Poor JAM indeed...

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2008 05:11 am Title: Chapter 2

No rocks -- Pam deserves some baggage free happiness, too!  It's all part of the process....

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing lisahoo, (and not throwing rocks). I honestly wasn't sure how that move would be received, but I'm glad you approve. Thanks for reading! More to come soon!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

OK i like where you went with Pam going back into the bar and that guy still being there. I think it was also sweet that you had him ask for her her number. I just want to know who you had in mind for the guy (I mean looks wise)

I can't wait for more... and to read Jim's side of the story. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review PokerChips! I slapped my hand to my head when I read your comment about not describing the guys looks...duh, should have done that...look for that in future chapters...my apologies! Jim's side of the story is coming next, so stay tuned! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh my goshhhhhhhh ! please PLEASE write more to this !!!! it was so perfect ! great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comments dundermifflinthisisdani! (whew that's a mouthful!) I took the advice of the wise, wonderful reviewers here...Chapter two is up!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2008 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Of course you need to continue!! It's just crazy not to!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing DunderSnob! Continue I did indeed...Chapter two is up!

Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was really wonderful! I was hanging on to every word as I was reading. Lovely writing. I could really feel all the anger and temptation and pain and awkwardness and desire and heat. It was really wonderful. Even though it could definately work as a one-shot (thanks to your fantastic writing), unlike a lot of one-shots, this story has so so much potential for more. And as such, I really would love to see this story of yours continued. But in any case, well done! You did a marvellous job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much epiphilly for your wonderful compliments! I'm always worried I'm being too verbose, or not conveying the emotion I hope to convey, so your words come as great comfort to me. I think I will continue this one, though I'm still in the midst of figuring out how to proceed. Thank you so much for your kind words, I really appreciate all your support on this endeavor! Look for more soon!

Reviewer: jimsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Should you continue? ABSOLUTELY!!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks jimsgirl! I think I will continue, though I'm still trying to figure out what the heck I'm going to do to poor Jim and Pam next... Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes! Please continue... it's time to turn their bad luck in parking lots around!

PS I think you meant to use "he" here - "As we walked away, she felt her tears begin to fall..."



Author's Response: Whoops! You're right...definitely a typo...it was about 1:30am by the time I finished it, so I'll blame it on sleepiness. ;) Thanks for your encouragement...and I think I will continue, so stay tuned for more!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Angst, party of two -- your table is ready....

If you want to write more, including a big-breakup scene to clear the decks for Jim to kiss the hell out of Pam like he wants to, I'd read and review.  Promise.  We need something to dull the pain of our forced Jam famine.



Author's Response: Oh lisahoo, your little quips always make me smile! As for a big breakup scene...perhaps...as for Jim kissing the hell out of Pam like he really wants too...hell yes! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! More to come soon!

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

If this is continued i will be there to enjoy every chapter. But if you do continue I think it will have to still be the same night... and a little more drinking.

I really enjoyed this story, you are an excellent writer. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words PokerChips! I have to admit I'm feeling a Pam-like blush at your incredible compliment. Thank you! Also, I think I will continue, though I still have to figure out where the heck I'm going with it...more drinking is quite a distinct possibility... Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 10:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahh! Can't leave it like that! Definitely continue. I know I'll be reading ;-)

Author's Response: Yeah, that was kinda mean wasn't it...alright, I'll amend my previous statement...no more oneshot status. Look for more soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1

CON.

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Puh-leeeeeeeez!

How about, say, 6 or 7 torturous chapters, followed by 1 make-up chapter, followed by, say, a few perhaps smut-lite chapters to wrap this up?
I see you INVESTING!!



Author's Response: Haha! I love your story progression suggestion! I laughed for a good couple of minutes after reading your review. I think I will continue, though I'm still sorting out the details...look for more soon! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I appreciate all the support!

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13, 2008 07:14 am Title: Chapter 1

This was such a great story!! I love reading about happy/alive Pam! I know you said it's probably a one-shot, but I'm gonna put my vote in for continuing. It's just too good, I'd LOVE to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words nandance! I'm still in the process of figuring out what the heck I'm going to do with this now that I've started, but I think I will continue. Thanks for all your support!

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