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Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 01:57 pm Title: Those damn pens again

AHHH! what a great ending! i loved this story from the beginning and i'm sad it's over! but great job, i can't wait to read more stories by you! keep up the good work!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 10:43 am Title: Those damn pens again

adorable...can't wait for more stories...maybe a season 4 what might have happened at the christmas episode since we will never see that (crying)...

Reviewer: Calli Wall Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 24, 2008 06:20 am Title: Those damn pens again

fabulous

Reviewer: bootyz30 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2008 08:39 am Title: Formositas falsus

I just got caught up with this story and I love it! Great work, I cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 05:59 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers

I've really enjoyed reading this.... checking every day for new updates. I'm sorry to hear there's only once chapter left, but you've given us a lot of good reading. Thanks.


Author's Response: :DDD aw thank you =] and never fear, i'm always writing sooo they'll be others stories on here just look out for them thanks for reading!!<3

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 04:25 pm Title: Formositas falsus

Only ONE MORE chapter! Oh, no! I love this story so much that I NEVER want it to end, although I know that isn't possible.

GREAT job writing this! It is AMAZING and every time i see it on 'most recent stories' i click on it first and read it, even if i don't have time. (x 

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2008 04:29 pm Title: Secret's Out

I liked this chapter.  The actions seemed in character and I'm really curious about where things go from here.

Reviewer: Pamma Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 05:16 pm Title: Secret's Out

As much as I hate to see Jim get punched in the face (he's just too pretty lol), I'm glad it's out in the open now! I love the story, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: its assumed he's getting punched...he might just duck ;]

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 01:10 pm Title: Secret's Out

oh my gosh...so dramatic...hopefully there is still more!!

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2008 10:13 pm Title: Transcript

I'm enjoying this story and hope you can get through the next bit soon.  Since you asked, my thought is that who Pam is with is her choice.  If Jim tries to make the decision for her, she's in another situation just like she's in now with Roy.  He could be with her when she tells Roy, though - never seen that attempted.  Just my thoughts.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2008 05:55 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers

It would be out of character for Jim to tell Roy, but than again it would be nice to see him do it!

Author's Response: :DD thanks for the input!

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2008 03:17 pm Title: Transcript

I think jim telling roy may be too out of character, entering the far side of AU land...but that's just my opinion.

like the story though.

Author's Response: ok, thanks for your imput :D

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 09:26 am Title: The morning after

This is going to get sexified, isn't it?  But Pam's hung over.  Hung over sex?  Not my first choice.

Author's Response: actually no its not. its rated pg-15

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 06:54 pm Title: The morning after

"...the reason I make so many jokes, especially when they shouldn't be said is just a cover up for the fact that I have no idea what to say in a serious situation." 

BINGO!!! You nailed Jim in this one sentence alone. Great line! I enjoyed the whole chapter. BTW, it wasn't that short and you're writing muse seems to be doing fine. :)

 

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 01:00 pm Title: The morning after

more ! soon ! :)

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 06:09 am Title: The morning after

oh wow...they rock...can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: flonkertonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2008 03:48 am Title: The morning after

awww, thanks for mentioning me!

i really enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Why do you have to leave me hangin'!?! 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2008 10:55 pm Title: The morning after

It was almost as if he’d left a gash and now her blood was rushing to the surface and leaving the wound, draining her.

I love this description of a blush/flush.

Reviewer: JamesMichael Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 03, 2008 07:39 pm Title: The morning after

its getting heated... i like heat. keep em' coming - i'm loving this tale

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2008 10:09 am Title: Wine and Keys

Hooray! I love this story. I've been away for a bit and that's why I haven't been able to reply. It's lovely! It's perfect!  Great job! 

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:55 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers

fantastic work. I am liking this story more and more with each new turn. :)

Reviewer: Jamgela Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Wine and Keys

This is a really, really great story! It is so adorable, and your characters are right on the mark. How much longer until we get a confrontation between Jim and Roy? I've always liked those *hinthint*. Please keep writing, I love it.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Wine and Keys

aww...i love that she stashed her keys and that he knew why in the end...that is so jim and pam...hope there is more!!

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 07:09 pm Title: The Forgotten Papers

Thanks for the update. I'm still reading and enjoying every word. You're doing a great job!


Author's Response: :DDD aw thank you!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2008 05:41 pm Title: inventory part 2: rain

"When the lights seemed to have gone out she took that moment, with the lightening as the only light, to throw herself in Jim’s arms and push her lips on his."

Wow, that was very romantic and electrifying (in the words of John Travolta in Grease). 

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