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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 24, 2018 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5

I wish this had a next chapter. I quite enjoy following their puzzle of the night before.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2014 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

Come on!! You stopped!?! You stopped there?!? WHY!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2011 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

Any chance of you continuing this? :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2008 09:07 am Title: Chapter 5

P.S.  This cracked me up:  “Are you telling me you made it to the Pam Pong finals?” Dwight was giddy with excitement. He couldn’t wait to tell Angela; she might even show some flicker of emotion.  Too funny : )

Author's Response: This was my favorite line of the chapter. I am so glad someone else enjoyed it!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2008 08:38 am Title: Chapter 5

I just read this from the beginning since my recollection was a little foggy (just like Jim and Pam's, right?).  Nice job!  I like how you handled the confrontation between Pam and Roy.  Looking forward to reading more and finding the underwear...

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I don't disappoint with the underwear reveal. It is such a big part of the story.

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like the way you write Pam. Instances where she feels guilty, but maybe for the wrong things, I really think that's in character for her. With Roy though, I'm not sure I agree entirely that he'd try to control her interaction with jim so entirely (ok, so maybe in the heat of anger I can) because I think at heart he's an ok guy, but I like this Roy too. Angry Roy is lots of fun. He certainly is more of a schmuk though than he would have been if he'd told her if he caught her with jim today he'd leave her. So ... Go Angry Roy.

I love Dwight's involvement too. He's so much fun. It's been a really immersing read so far. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I have the same issue with Roy that I do with Karen, I can't hate them because they are decent people, but they are in the way. I find it extremely difficult to write him. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 5

I really liked this chapter, and I did like the way you wrote Roy. At first, I was felt bad because Pam was just blatantly lying to him and he seemed to believe it...but then he knew the whole time!! That's definitely more like Roy...especially the comment about what he would do if he saw her with Jim again. Eeep!! Great chapter, looking forward to the next one. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing all the chapters thus far. You're great for doing that. Roy is so difficult to write. I want him to be the bad guy, but he really isn't. I think I wrote this chapter 4 times before settling on this version. Thanks again for your awesome reviews.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

“Because I am tying the knot and your tie has a knot. It is the perfect background really.” She really is the cutest. Things seem to be getting really intense!

Author's Response: It is very fun to write them drunk. They are all rainbows and sunshine.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hahaha Jim's underwear is missing too??? LOL copies of Jim's tie on fancy expensive paper. This story is hilariously funny. =)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved the running around in the morning, and the prank they pulled on Dwight. Haha Mark's cameo was cute. I'm really looking forward to figuring out what happened last night through their snippets of flashbacks. OMG her panties are missing??? We need to know what happened. =)

Author's Response: All in good time. I will give you this though, the underwear are found before they remember what happened.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heehee! This is such a cute start! Aww waking up all snuggled. =)

Author's Response: I had meant this to be fluffy and fun like the first chapter, but angst just seems to follow Jim and Pam.

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

holy shit! drama to the max! i think you got what roy would have done if pam and jim had done something and he found out. i totally believed it. and i cant wait for more.

Reviewer: ALC Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great fic you have, here!  I really love all the tension and angst and can't wait to see what's coming up next. Please update soon! :)  

Author's Response: I try to update once a week-ish. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

“Hypothetically, what would you think would happen when a flirty happy drunk and a playful happy drunk spent the night alone together?”

I cannot wait to find out the answer to that question!



Author's Response: As of right now there are no memory flashes planned for the next chapter, but there should be a nice one in chapter 6. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 2

This is a DELICIOUS premise!  Love the final paragraph.  You definitely got my attention with Jim discovered while he was changing, he was wearing his pants but he had not been wearing his boxers.

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad to have your attention. I very much enjoy the story you have on the board right now. :)

Reviewer: nandance Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG awesome update!!! I got chills with the line that went something like "he knew he was going to kiss her tonight"... Beautiful!

 

I hope you update again soon, I'm dying here ;) !!!



Author's Response: I have to come up with a topic for my policy paper and then I can work on chapter 5. I do have the Roy/Pam interactions outlined and if I don't have angst checked as a category I will have to add it after the next chapter. rnrnAnd I am glad you liked that line. It was one of my favorites too!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great story! I want to know where their undies went?!

Author's Response: Thanks!! The whereabouts of their undies is to come. Them being missing is causing tension I am not willing to let go as of yet.

Reviewer: Jammer Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

omggg!!! please update very very soon! i love this story so much! :]]]]


Author's Response: I actually had to split this chapter into two parts so I am almost finished with chapter 4 :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh, this is fab! I can't wait to see this continue!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, I should be posting a new chapter tonight-ish.

Reviewer: Mirielle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

very intriquing story.... can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG!! This is awesome! I can almost see this happening on the show. Pam and Jim drunk together should always end up an automatic smut fest. Can't wait to see how this plays out with the undergarments, and Roy.

Can't wait for the next update ;-)

Author's Response: No smut fest to come any time soon. Roy comes in chapter 5 and the undergarments should resurface sometime after that.rnrnI am hoping to update tonight :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oooooo!  Missing underwear?!  I love it!  This is getting good. 

Author's Response: I love how everyone is focusing on the underwear. I hope you all won't be too disappointed when it is found.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

So awesome. especially the end.

Author's Response: Thank you. I like the end too!

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 2

Missing undergarmets....very interesting.

Author's Response: LOL - they will be missing for a while.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your first story here!  Great beginning, I'm anxious to see what happens next...

Author's Response: Thank you! I have already learned something important. No watching Top Model while responding to reviews. It is impossible to make coherent sentences (see below). I hope you like the next chapter.

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