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Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 03:43 pm Title: Her Time

Hot at ff.net -- still hot here. Nice work!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Her Time

Yowza. Really great work.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 07:17 pm Title: Her Time

Heh, I remember this from FF.net, all those months ago.  It was one of the first fics I read after I realized there was a whole 'nother section on there that was rated "M." 

Nice and hot. 

Reviewer: Jonah5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 06:09 pm Title: Her Time

Was this posted on FF before?  I think I remeber it and oh boy, it is still just as wonderfully steamy.

Author's Response: It was but I've been living on this site lately, so I tweaked it and posted it here. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 06:03 pm Title: Her Time

Wow.  Hawt. 

 This is totally realistic, too.  Nice work.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 06:02 pm Title: Her Time

Steamy!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Her Time

That was smokin'!  Very nicely done for your first smut!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 04:16 pm Title: Her Time

Holy smoke. When smut is well written and stays true to character - as you've done here - it's a wonderful thing. Love the way you tied Roy in at the end ('Pam, come on!') - clever. Any more of these on the horizon?

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so glad you liked it! I'm not particularly prolific (I'm more of a reader than a writer) but sometimes the plot bunnies won't leave me alone. I'll give it some thought.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2006 03:42 pm Title: Her Time

Wow. That was quite good and makes you feel really sad for Pam that she doesn't have the real Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks - I think there are a lot of people who are sad that they don't have a real Jim!

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