Reviews For Providence
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Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2009 06:22 am Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

I just wanted you to know that this weekend I spent in Providence, and it was so nice to read this story. It just came up in the 'Random Story' file, and I got really excited. Thank you for this little anecdote, it was wonderful.

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2008 08:38 am Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

I really like this story! Very fluffy. :-) I like seeing Pam and Jim this way.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 02:05 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

I have never even had cheesecake. That is my pre-story declaration.

Okay, and I think I am Jim in this sense. I would get plain. But witout the cherries. Actually, I would be the complainly person I am and refuse to go and throw a tantrum like a two year old. Well, maybe not that bad, but still.

Not that I have ever been to a work covention, but I think it would be a lot more enjoyable with Jim. Just saying.

(also, sorry for any letters randomly missing. I am trying to catch them all, but my entire right hand side of my keyboard is failing, and sometimes I don't hit the key hard enough to take, and it doesn't registar)

"The 'I'll take a chance if you do, too' dialogue."
One word: Perfect.

Of course by using the hotel room, they are just going to watch tv. Right?

Whoa, those cheesecakes look yummy. I may have to try them oneday.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2008 09:19 am Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Oh man, that Boggle timer business reminds me of Jack and Ianto's stopwatch flirting in Torchwood!  Do you watch that show?  Hee!  And it managed to push my insatiable craving for cheesecake right outta my head, too!

Reviewer: kiki25 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 10:15 am Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

I always enjoy reading your stories and I was pleasantly surprised to see you put Jim & Pam in Providence, RI. I grew up in RI on the shore and it's very rarely mentioned in writings, conversations, etc. (unless it's being made fun of, hehe). Thanks for a sweet story that made me nostalgic for my home state!

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 07:38 am Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Mox you never disappoint!  It's pretty funny I've actually read every story that you've posted on this site.  I'm kind of a T4Moxie expert!   There are some very talented authors on this site (who I also enjoy) but you are consistantly excellent! I think you are talented enough to write for the show!

LOL

B

Reviewer: invis Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 11:05 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Oh, man. For future reference, always end with the cheesecake; I almost couldn't concentrate on the rest of the story due to thinking about all the mind-blowingly delicious varieties of cheesecake. Oh, God, the lemon raspberry cream cheesecake! I don't even know if I can sleep tonight. I'll be tossing and turning all night, thinking about that stuff!

But, um, I mean, awesome story. :) 

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 06:46 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Ok, I'm going to mention something that's possibly reputation damaging...but I've never been to Cheesecake Factory before! I know, it's crazy...but there you have it. This was just too too cute. I don't know if Jim and Pam or the cheesecakes were sweeter. Either way, they complimented each other! I love their back and forth here--both physically in the both, and mentally with their "you should jump and I will too" discussion. All around great stuff!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 06:31 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

“I can see that,” he teased. “You are an exceptional savorer.”

And you, Mox, are an exceptional author!  This was such a sweet story and I don't mean because of the cheesecake either. I liked that Jim still keeps souvenirs and that they're encouraging each other down new paths and Pam packing the Boggle timer.  

“But what if regular cheesecake sounds delicious to me? What if that's what I want?”   Was Jim saying Pam = regular cheesecake = what he wants?  

Reviewer: effayoffay Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 05:26 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

Super cute. I love how Jim saves everything, that's so sweet. And guh, now I'm craving Cheesecake Factory. There's one right by my house but there's always a three hour wait. *dies*

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 04:59 pm Title: It's Pronounced Riz-dee....

What a cute story! I really liked that one!

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