5 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2016 01:29 pm Title: Hope
Nope. No way would he stay with Karen if Pam had said she loved him. He would have ditched her like he did Katie.
8 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Round 2
I like how you combined Pam's words from BG into this and then made what she said even better: "...the reason I left with Roy was because I couldn't leave with you. I'm in love with you, and seeing the two of you every day, it hurts, but I can deal with it. But at Phyllis' wedding, seeing the two of you so together, so happy, it was like something broke."
And then Jim rushing off to see Karen - another great turn of the S3 angst knife to my heart!
8 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Round 1
First, congrats on your first Office fic! I think you've done a great job with the angst from that episode. I'm really looking forward to the fluff, though.
9 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 12:44 pm Title: Hope
Yay! ok, they're together now! Bring on the Jammy goodness! lol
9 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 12:34 pm Title: Round 2
I'm liking fierce Pam here! Great chapter!
8 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 12:30 pm Title: Round 1
oh! Great first chapter! Off to read the next...!
9 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 08:09 am Title: Hope
Yup, this is good - move quickly through the angst and face first into fluff. I'm game if you write it.
Date: February 02, 2008 11:21 pm Title: Round 2
"...the reason I left with Roy was because I couldn't leave with you..."
What a lovely way to sum that up! I think you're off to a nice start here, and I'm interested to see what's up next, especially since he was so callous with her here at the end. I might suggest you review the chapter one more time to make sure all the right words are capitalized; there were a few parts where that took me out of the moment.
But other than that, this is a solid start to an interesting story. I'll be keeping my eyes open for more updates! --CH