Date: March 19, 2008 08:37 pm Title: Anyone Else But You
*sigh* This was absolutely perfection, seriously. I've read an insane amount of Jim/Pam fics and a fair few of them have included a proposal but this is by far the best I've read. That line "I don't see what anyone sees in anyone but you" is just a brilliant choice, perfectly sums up Jim.
Date: March 17, 2008 11:31 am Title: Lucky You
Oh my god -- I am so in love with this story, it's unreal. I just came across it trying to catch up on my JAM fanfic and am so enamoured with this there are just no words!
I love how you've spotlighted these moments -- some big and some small -- and perfectly distilled what makes Jim Halpert so loveable and why Jim and Pam are so MFEO. I also love that you are exploring that they are both only human, which a lot of fanfic just glosses over. I think this chapter in particular is so revealing. I think it makes a lot of sense that Pam would feel guilt over Roy's downward spiral but also that Jim would resent her need to help Roy born out of that guilt. VERY skillfully done!
Date: February 23, 2008 12:35 am Title: The One You Knew
Oh. Wow. That was so incredibly touching. The beginning was really cute but it just quickly evolved into one of the most heartbreaking stories I've ever read. I ached for both Jim and Pam and how Pam would never get to meet his dad. And that last line...there are no words, so heartbreaking, so beautifully written. *tears*
Date: February 23, 2008 12:25 am Title: Flowers In The Window
Oh I love Pam's email and I could just feel the butterflies and nervousness between them afterwards. The breakup sounds like it was really rough but I'm glad Jim was there for her afterwards. I'm really enjoying these vignettes, you're a great storyteller. =)
Date: February 06, 2008 06:17 am Title: The Guy That Says Goodbye To You Is Out Of His Mind
of course jim would come to the rescue...i think he would be a little more torn up about this and having to step into the argument...idk that is just my thoughts...can't wait for more
Date: February 05, 2008 10:05 pm Title: The Guy That Says Goodbye To You Is Out Of His Mind
flowers in the window?! the travis song!? I peed. i love it please do more asap. *ads to favorite stories and hopes to get 4 more successive emails in the next 10 minutes*