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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23, 2008 06:36 pm Title: The Merger

More please?

Reviewer: Aiya Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2008 10:02 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Mmmhmm. It's been several months without an update. Any chance of another chapter?

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 11:35 am Title: The Merger

I love this. I love that Karen got herself out of the mess before anyone got too badly hurt. She deserved to have this kind of power over her own fate.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 11:21 am Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Very nice. Think how easy it could have been? And then Karen and Pam could have been friends. Ah, well. I do like Karen here a lot.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 08:01 pm Title: The Merger

“Yeah, well, I’d try act like it wasn’t a big deal too if a guy who’d told me he loved me when I was engaged to someone else came to be later and told me he had a girlfriend.”

I really think it would have gone this way if Karen had only known earlier what was truly going on.

PS I think you meant to say "me" where I highlighted above..

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2008 07:51 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

"But tonight…tonight he had been adorable beyond endurance." 

I loved Karen's reaction to the drunken adorableness that was Jim - including the X-rated thoughts. (But I'm still glad he answered the phone...)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2008 08:21 am Title: The Merger

You're two for two, BaraJam.  Of course Karen would be inuitive, being in sales, and I like the way she pushes Jim.  Great job.  Now give me another fix!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 10:27 pm Title: The Merger

I love what you're doing with these scenarios!  And I really like how sympathetically you've portrayed Karen.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 08:46 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Oh, what a great way for Pam and Jim to reconnect! I loved Karen in this (though I just plain love Karen). Great job!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 06:59 pm Title: The Merger

Really love this one too. I like the way you write Karen, she wants Jim but at the same time she realizes that she can't have him. Loved this line: Jim Halpert might be single, but he was definitely, completely unavailable. and the part where she says, "Yeah, well, I’d try act like it wasn’t a big deal too if a guy who’d told me he loved me when I was engaged to someone else came to be later and told me he had a girlfriend.” Oh, and when she realizes that Jim probably didn't have anyone to talk to about this, so she's the one who listened to him. So yeah, I really did like Karen. Heehee. =)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 06:50 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Awww. I'm a Karen fan and I loooved this story. Drunk!Jim is just the cutest. I really do wish Pam would have texted him again...or that Jim would have responded.

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 06:28 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Oh how I wish things had really turned out this way! But I guess that's why we have great fanfic like this. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 04:39 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

This is very good and I can believe the characters might act this way.  Really enjoyed this!

Reviewer: Keds Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 03:50 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

I like your version much better than what we saw on TV.  I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Diwali Drunk Dialing

Hoping you don't mind a JAM fan review:  LOVED IT. 

Author's Response: Of course not! I hear t all reviews. I just wanted to ask those with a natural predisposition to Karen to let me know what they thought of my take on her.

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