Date: February 19, 2008 10:01 pm Title: Dad's Recipe
I LOVE this entire story! I've been meaning to review each chapter but am finally getting to it. Your writing style is so fun to read and so realistic. This chapter is great; such hopefulness mixed with anxiety while getting their feelings out. Please keep writing - especially more date fics would be great.
Date: February 13, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Sweet Nothings
Wow. Jim is a wooer extraordinaire! (More French!)
I just love the second e-card:
‘We kiss and the world disappears’
Her hand shook slightly as she clicked to open it. Inside he’d written:
‘It does, you know. Everytime. Have lunch with me.’
Date: February 13, 2008 11:37 am Title: Sweet Nothings
She then spent the next five minutes staring at her monitor until she remembered what it was for.
That is a brilliant end to a wonderful chapter. I like this story because I love the idea of their relationship developing within the old framework of teasing each other. Also, Jim is adorable.
By the way, you might want to alter your summary - it still reads that part 3 is up so even though it's at the top of the 'new list' some people might not notice it's been updated.
Date: February 13, 2008 05:43 am Title: Sweet Nothings
I'm grinning. So cute...and sexym, too! “Did you know,” he whispered as they walked slowly towards Dunder Miflin’s door. “That when I kiss you full on the lips, they turn the most beautiful shade of pink?" Nice.