Reviews For Up in Jim's Room
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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 02:52 am Title: Chapter 14

I enjoyed reading this as a whole!

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 02:34 am Title: Chapter 10

Very good!

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 02:30 am Title: Chapter 9

You're working up the romantic tension very well!

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 02:13 am Title: Chapter 7

Great aftermath scene.

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Date: October 21, 2023 02:07 am Title: A Different Kind of 'I Can't'

Nice cliffanger. I also thought the transition between Pam returning from the boat deck and chatting with Katy later.

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 01:51 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

Great set-up chapter, and Pam's increasing infatuation with Jim and the characterisation of Jim from her eyes were spot on! Only snag: 'she asked' doesn't need a capital letter.

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 01:48 am Title: Jim-a-thon

This is exactly how I picture Pam's sexual frustration. Great characterisation here!

Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2023 01:32 am Title: Peeping Pam

Very funny! It's great to see an independent take on 2x09.

Reviewer: Obviously_Blonde Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2023 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oof🥵, I'm so happy Mark did not make an appearance at the end. This is too good!

Reviewer: Obviously_Blonde Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2023 01:26 pm Title: Peeping Pam

Angst and steam might be my favorite duo from now on!

Reviewer: HazyGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01, 2021 08:32 am Title: Chapter 14

Love this story!

Reviewer: Iris-Dietrich Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2020 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 10

damn, that was hot, well done

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 14

This is one I’ve come back to many times. It will always be a top favorite. (As are a few others from you.)
But what I wouldn’t give to have a companion piece written in jims POV.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2009 11:57 am Title: Chapter 11

"OhmyGodohmyGod, she thought. I will never get tired of making love to this man."

I don't know why, but that sentence just... guh. makes me all tingly. no, not like THAT.

okay, maybe a little.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2009 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 9

i'm glad you decided not to turn roy into a complete jackass when they broke up, because he really is a good guy. sure, he lost his temper a few times, but all in all, a nice guy. i DO think that he was in love with pam, and vice versa. so again... thank you. "jackass roy" is just too cliche.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2009 10:51 am Title: Chapter 14

i loved it! you really wrote this well... the alternate ending of the booze cruise didn't feel forced at all.

and i disagree about jim & pam's post-coital talk... i DO think it would be that effortless. that's just... them.

Reviewer: Angeldust Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2008 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 14

Great ! Loved it !

Reviewer: WhatAWaste Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

I don't know how I missed this story, but I just read it. Wonderful! I like your take on Pam's feelings about Katy as well as all your delicious steam.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 14

FANTASTIC!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 13

I need me a Jim :(

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 12

lol and then mark walks in...

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 11

Okay this show needs to move to cable!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 10

*dead*

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 9

All I can say is... eeeeeppppp

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2008 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 8

Because he wants more than that ahhhhhhhhhh *dies*

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