Date: September 15, 2009 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
i'm glad you decided not to turn roy into a complete jackass when they broke up, because he really is a good guy. sure, he lost his temper a few times, but all in all, a nice guy. i DO think that he was in love with pam, and vice versa. so again... thank you. "jackass roy" is just too cliche.
Date: August 17, 2009 10:51 am Title: Chapter 14
i loved it! you really wrote this well... the alternate ending of the booze cruise didn't feel forced at all.
and i disagree about jim & pam's post-coital talk... i DO think it would be that effortless. that's just... them.
Date: June 02, 2008 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
I just finished chapter 8 and i just want to thank you for taking this story slowly so far. I have read so many fics where the writers immediately jump into the very intimate JAM relationship and don't give it time to develop. My favorite parts of a Jim and Pam fanfic are the sweet Jim moments and you have written some good ones so far. Thank you!
Author's Response: Ah, you're welcome Sammie! My biggest complaint about a lot of romantic comedies is that half the time you don't understand why the couple even falls in love in the first place. With Jim and Pam, the danger is that we already KNOW (and have seen) why they fell in love, so we fic writers tend to rush into the intimate stuff. But the developing relationship and building tension is half the fun. Glad you don't mind that I took this one a bit slower. ;-) Hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Date: June 02, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
I just finished chapter 8 and i just want to thank you for taking this story slowly so far. I have read so many fics where the righters immediately jump into the very intimate JAM relationship and don't give it time to develop. My favorite parts of a Jim and Pam fanfic are the sweet Jim moments and you have written some good ones so far. Thank you!
Date: May 19, 2008 06:34 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Definitely one of my very favorite stories. There's something so exactly right about your Jim, your Pam, and your Jam. And I :heart: your Mark.
Author's Response: Thanks Aurorabee! So glad you like this one . . . It was a really fun one to write. I love the idea of that switch flipping in Pam's mind -- Jim going from best friend to sexy boy toy when she see's him kissing Katy. I guess ever since Hot Girl I thought that potential was there, when the cameras caught Pam putting on her lip gloss... Anyway, I ramble. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: April 06, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 14
I just found this story and read it all at once. I loved it! I love intimacy smut:) I thought the built up, with Pam's slow realization that she had been in love with Jim all along, was very well done, and very believable. It's so nice to discover a great new author. Off to read more of your stuff:)
Author's Response: Thanks, Muppet. I love the build up ;-) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Really means a lot!