Reviews For Up in Jim's Room
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Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 03:25 pm Title: A Different Kind of 'I Can't'

See, that how it was supposed to happen!!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 03:11 pm Title: A Different Kind of 'I Can't'

OMIGOSH! That's the best kind of "I can't!" Can't wait for the next part :)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 02:42 pm Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I'm getting such a kick out of this story.  It's so different from the usual "Jim wanting Pam and she's pretty much oblivious or in denial" storyline.  The tables are turned and I love how Pam is getting so turned on just being next to him or hearing his voice. 

You're pleasing the Halpert hussy in all of us.  Please continue.



Author's Response: Ah, I love turning the tables from time to time. And I love Pam lust for Jim -- it's so relatable, huh? Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review (sorry I'm slow in responding!).

Reviewer: Strider Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Jim-a-thon

Oh, yes, I do love it...that moment when your best friend suddenly becomes a sexual being...YUMMY! I married mine...

--Strider

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 01:50 pm Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I was gonna write something about this chapter but then saw next up: Booze crusie with a twist and I got excited about what is coming next.  Please write fast.:)

Reviewer: Strider Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 12:52 pm Title: Not That Guy

I really love the latent dissastisfaction that is surfacing in Pam. Really, there's nothing like a little competition to hone your feelings! Well written!

--Strider

Reviewer: Strider Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 12:47 pm Title: Peeping Pam

Very steamy...poor Pam...I hate/love that aroused/mortified feeling. You captured it really well with Pam.

--Strider

Author's Response: The "aroused/mortified" feeling is quite familiar to all of us, isn't it? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, Strider! Sorry I'm so slow with my responses...

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 11:10 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

Why are you killing me with this story?!?!  Seriously, is there some kind of support group, because that would probably be really helpful... Can't wait for more, especially if more includes the booze cruise!

Author's Response: stablergirl . . . I'm finally getting around to responding to reviews and I have to say -- I'm so flattered that I was able to kill you with this story because that's what you've been doing to me with "Famous". I guess we're both each others' crack peddlers, huh? Ah well. Thanks so much for reviewing (way back when). Truly appreciated.

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:58 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I love, love, love this story.  That is all.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:42 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

Oh, I love this chapter! I'm embarrassed to admit to doing this with one of my inappropriate office crushes one time - logging the outfits, haircuts, etc. Love it!

AND! Wow, Pam is going to leave Roy already - that's amazing! Can't wait to see what happens on the Booze Cruise now ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:26 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I so love this.  It makes me giddy.

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:20 am Title: Peeping Pam

Oh why, oh why did I wait so long to read this? Oh, I know! Because I knew it'd be SO good and I'd anxiously be waiting an update. So clearly, I blame you, because I dunno.. who else can I blame? Certainly not me.

So translation: Story very, very good (seriously, really good) and I am not-so-patiently waiting for another read. Also, stop with the brilliance. :D 



Author's Response: Wow, thanks oobadnama. Really, really nice review. Sorry I'm so slow to respond (no excuse other than writing fic). Truly appreciate your taking the time...

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:18 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

You really created that crackle of electricity Pam suddenly feels - when his hand is inches away or he stands close in the elevator - and her sense of being both obsessed with minutae about him/embarrassed by feeling that way. What woman (or guy, for all I know) hasn't felt that? She's becoming a Board Certified Jim-o-logist, I tell you! Love your spin on the teapot saga too -rang true. Okay, talk about building pressure like a wave (nicely put, btw)...something's gotta give, right?

Author's Response: Colette, you seriously give the best reviews. Seriously. So much detail. It's so obvious you are a writer because you know what writers like to hear. Specifics. Anyway, I'm sorry I'm so slow in telling you this. I read the reviews as they come in, but I haven't responded. I've definitely learned my lesson. Keep up. Keep up. ;-)

Reviewer: waltisafox Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:11 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

i love love love this story. and all your stories so far actually.

but this one is so awesome. the gift bit at the end and her realizing from the thoughtless, practical things versus the teapot was written so well. the details you put into this, such as the cd that roy wanted more than her, just really drive the point home.

so so great. can not wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks waltisafox! I love it when people give specifics about what works (and even what doesn't), so I really appreciate your taking the time to do that!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:05 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

She noticed that he probably only had about 5 ties.  That Pam, such a hussy!  Nice job with this, BTW, Wendolf!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 10:03 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

So, can you just write all day and post updates?  'Cause I don't want to clean, do laundry, or do work from home...I'd rather just read this entire story.  

I love how she knows what days he shaves, and how she's starting to notice all of the little things about him.  Oh Pam, welcome to the world of loving Jim Halpert.  It's useless - just give in!  

More soon please! :) 



Author's Response: Yeah, I find I've been avoiding cleaning, laundry, etc. to write . . . it's so much more fun analyzing what makes Jim so sexy than folding my kids' pajamas. Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: kerber1920 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 09:52 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

Roy is a dip :P I'm glad it's gotten through to her. Bring on the new stuff! :)

Reviewer: agd300 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 09:51 am Title: A Teapot and Some Jumper Cables

I LOVE THIS STORY!  It's soooo good... please please please update soon.  It is stories like this that have made the lack of new eps bearable!

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 08:53 am Title: Jim-a-thon

uh oh, sounds dangerous ;-)  i'm loving this story!!! I'll be constantly checking for updates, so you know...don't hurt yourself or anything, but keep on writing.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 08:52 am Title: Jim-a-thon

Oh dear Miss Pam, now that you've let the genie out of the bottle, there's no putting back the cork, is there?  Delicious.

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 08:24 am Title: Peeping Pam

What's really interesting here is that Pam has no idea what Jim is thinking.  In her mind, he's all into Katy - at least sexually.  Little does she know that he's thinking the same things about her, and recounting all the little moments where their arms touch or whatever.  Can't wait to see where this goes! 

Author's Response: Yeah, I kind of hope to write this entire story from Pam's POV. I like her trying to figure it out on her own, without Jim spelling it out... Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: kerber1920 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 08:18 am Title: Jim-a-thon

Woah -- Pam's got it baaaaad! Looking forward to more, update soon k? ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12, 2008 08:02 am Title: Jim-a-thon

And something about knowing it wasn’t just her – that other women found him sexy, too – just made her feel . . . restless.  Love that line. 

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Peeping Pam

I forgot to mention in my first review, I read Up in Seth's Room, too! And I totally thought of it when I saw the title of your story. Cool.

Author's Response: No way! I don't remember many specifics about that book but just that it made my 13-year-old self blush. Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: grapejelly Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2008 09:08 pm Title: Not That Guy

I can hardly wait for chapter 3!

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