9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 09:03 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Oooh, a promising beginning. I can't wait to read the rest!
Date: March 11, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Not That Guy
Love the premise! It's great to have a new take on Jim's BBQ, and your characters felt spot-on.
Date: March 11, 2008 12:47 pm Title: Peeping Pam
god i have wanted to read this kind of story forever. i kind of love voyeur!pam and the reminder that jim actually is, you know, a guy. who has sex.
Author's Response: Yeah, why is that so hot? The realization that a guy is a . . .well, guy. Who has sex. Well said ;-) Thanks for your comments! More to come, hopefully tomorrow.
Date: March 11, 2008 12:16 pm Title: Not That Guy
Thanks for the quick update :) Man, Pam can't win can she, ugh! Looking forward to seeing what goes on next...
Date: March 11, 2008 11:45 am Title: Not That Guy
Oh, Miss Pam, you are a glutton for punishment, aren't you?
Date: March 11, 2008 11:45 am Title: Not That Guy
Oh yeah. This is gonna be good. I mean, it's already good, but it's going to be really really good. Great premise, and boy did you nail Katy's voice or what? I can't wait to read more. Feel free to update quickly ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 11:35 am Title: Peeping Pam
Oh, fast updates!! My favorite. I'm really excited to see where this goes.
Date: March 11, 2008 11:33 am Title: Peeping Pam
"Peeping Pam"...I like it!
Date: March 11, 2008 11:23 am Title: Peeping Pam
Finding this was like a little oasis in the midst of a crappy day. Also love that you update quickly - am all about the immediate gratification ;-) I could see Pam getting a vicarious buzz from watching/imagining Jim with Katy - kind of the closest she'd gotten to his sexuality at that point - but it also making her a little queasy. Very intriguing angle...looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Author's Response: Colette, that's exactly it -- that vicarious buzz of watching the forbidden fruit make out with the cheerleader (is that a mixed metaphor or what?). There's something interesting about the moment of truth that takes Jim from "friend" to "sexy hot guy". I like the thought process. As always, thanks for your comments!!!
Date: March 11, 2008 11:18 am Title: Not That Guy
GREAT story!! I was so excited to see this one, it's a cool take on the Email Surveillance premise...I love it! I can't wait to read more. Pam better get her butt back in that house ASAP :)
Date: March 11, 2008 10:55 am Title: Not That Guy
Hot.
wendolf, I love your fresh perspective--the fact that you've taken an episode that we're all familiar with and explored a different angle. Your dialog is spot on. You've captured the awkward sexiness that is Jim and Pam. I also appreciate that you're quick to update. Thanks for that : )
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! I appreciate your thoughtful comments!
9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 10:49 am Title: Peeping Pam
Wow!! Really well written but so uncomfortable tha I had to cover my eyes for the scary part. Nice, can't wait to be skeeved out more. ;)
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks so much, Bros. Really appreciate your review -- sorry I'm so terribly slow in responding.
Date: March 11, 2008 10:43 am Title: Peeping Pam
Okay, I read this at work but couldn't comment until my lunch break - and now I see there's a second chapter, so thank you :)
Wow, this was fab! I love the idea of Katy coming over for a booty call and Jim being confused by receptive. Oh, I've so been in Pam's shoes before and it totally sucks when you're not admitting it to yourself. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Who wouldn't want to give Jim a booty call? ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing . . . sorry I'm so terribly slow with my response!
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 09:13 am Title: Peeping Pam
Sounds like Jim may be getting his "happy ending" with Katy upstairs!!!
Date: March 11, 2008 09:07 am Title: Peeping Pam
Pam as voyeur - love it!
Date: March 11, 2008 08:57 am Title: Peeping Pam
Wow -- yeah I gotta say good stuff! Can't wait to read more...
10 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 08:54 am Title: Peeping Pam
Interesting idea! Looking forward to more...
7 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 08:27 am Title: Peeping Pam
I really like this premise! Too bad we didn't see Katy more and Pam's jealousy on the show! I hope you update soon!